Topic: FICTIONAL REALITY
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Tue 07/15/08 08:17 PM
FICTIONAL REALITY



I drew the line...
YOU CROSSED IT!!!
You thought I'd be fine....
I LOST IT!!!!

You brought the tears....
NOW ILL BRING THE FEAR!!!!
Just one more thing....
THEN IM OUT OF HERE!!!!

You took for granted,
All we had...
Now looking back,
Were things that bad?
Self centered,
Egoistical thoughts,
Were all good,
Until you were caught....

DECEITFUL,
CONNIVING,
NEVERENDING.....
LIEING....
TO ME,
YOU SEE....
YOUR FICTION,
IS NOW REALITY!!!!!

Tables turn....
As the hourglass flips....
You thought this would pass,
Yet farther back we slip....
"Time heals all...."
For me its not the case....
For the time you took,
Was mine, what a waste....
Trust turned,
To disbelief....
Happiness turned,
To so much grief...

DECEITFUL,
CONNIVING,
NEVERENDING.....
LIEING....
TO ME,
YOU SEE....
YOUR FICTION,
IS NOW REALITY!!!!!

What you wanted,
You allready had...
What used to be good,
Is now all bad....
How does it feel,
NOW...
THAT...
YOUR...
"PERCEIVED"...
REALITY,
IS FOR REAL!!!!!

DECEITFUL,
CONNIVING,
NEVERENDING.....
LIEING....
TO ME,
YOU SEE....
YOUR FICTION,
IS NOW REALITY!!!!!

















Megan_Smiles's photo
Tue 07/15/08 08:20 PM
great read!

ElaineSeekingJerry's photo
Tue 07/15/08 08:21 PM
Wow ... amazingly powerful.

sum14u2c's photo
Tue 07/15/08 08:33 PM
that's an awesome read! and what a creative way to let go of some anger

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Tue 07/15/08 08:38 PM
mad oops.......:tongue:

Thanks!!!!!!!flowerforyou

starlynsangel's photo
Tue 07/15/08 08:48 PM
loved itflowerforyou

TwilightsTwin's photo
Tue 07/15/08 08:52 PM
Wow, I loved it! I could feel the raw emotion.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 07/16/08 01:21 PM
flowerforyou
Writting it out very powerfully!