Topic: BROKEN DOLL
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Mon 07/14/08 06:20 AM
I remember you so clearly even if you don't
All the pieces of you that came together
In one magnificent whole

There were so many parts to you
You set me on a journey
And kept my mind racing
Thirsting for the knowledge
To mend a broken doll

You could be any of 1,000 women
And I could have any of them I wanted
But all I wanted was you

The most incredible woman I ever knew
That was you
Touching parts of me that no woman ever had

Exploring me while exploring you
There were always parts yet to be discovered
And so many stories to be told

A child that made me giggle
With wonder at the world
Adorable with an unforgettable smile
Life was nicer then...so much nicer

A seductress without peer
Your seduction came so natural
It tempted me deeper
As the music fused our souls

A busy woman with boundless energy
Filling every minute of every day
You knew no other way

A broken doll slipped from my fingers
And she was lost for a long time
Until I discovered her again

I couldn't repair my broken doll
So she fixed herself
How I don't know

What occurred is a mystery
She was always mysterious
An enigma, a puzzle, unsolvable

Memories are lost
Memories of what we once were

She'll always be broken
Even when she appears whole
And that is the knowledge I have
From mending a broken doll






ElaineSeekingJerry's photo
Mon 07/14/08 06:22 AM
:cry: wow ... achingly beautiful

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Mon 07/14/08 06:54 AM
insightful, great writeflowerforyou

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Mon 07/14/08 06:55 AM
insightful, great writeflowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 07/14/08 05:20 PM
Good write!
Welcome to the poetry posts!
flowerforyou