Topic: Haterade
d4tc's photo
Sun 07/13/08 01:52 PM
When people don't like you
It's makes you wonder
What kind of rock
They lay under
You know a stamp
You know how it can't stick
Unless you lick it
Well how could you send it
Away without giving it a good lick
How does the negativity flow
I know where it goes
It crushes someones soul
With the intention to do so
For people you don't know
People you never met
People who make you upset
For
Let's be honest
No reason
You dove in head first
What you didn't like
Felt like the worst
At that moment
You could've stood to be posititive
But you thought you'd give
Something else a whirl then
Twirling tornado spin
Spinning like a balerina
In one place
Getting no where with such
Madness on your face
Hurting feelings
Crushing dreams
We all do this
It seems
No one likes every musician
Everyone listens
To different music
It gets more chaotic when
You start playing favorites
Within your favorite genre
Saying I might have two
But I will use my good ear
This is what I hear
Hulk Hogan waved one hand
on each side of each ear
You know he heard both sides
The cheers and Jeers
Not
Trying to see clear
Not
Trying to keep clear
Orange cones
Yellow caution tape
Near
He dives
Off a turnbuckle
Elbow smash chuckle
Caring not of negative motives
Drivin by maddened minds
Who pray for for forgiveness
After they defy signs

bluesunflower's photo
Sun 07/13/08 01:53 PM
flowerforyou

Nova86's photo
Sun 07/13/08 01:58 PM
good sh** man...sounds like good rap lyrics...put it on a track and you have a hit

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Sun 07/13/08 02:03 PM
We make our OWN ROADS, then its up to us to use them or take the back roads,wink,,lol
Nice poem man..drinker

jimz's photo
Sun 07/13/08 02:11 PM
you are one of my favorite writersdrinker

d4tc's photo
Sun 07/13/08 02:13 PM
Thanks for all the replies;
bluesunflower flowerforyou
Nova86 drinker
Iam4u drinker

And

jimz drinker :wink:



you are one of my favorite writersdrinker



Ditto Man! bigsmile

myanimalcracker's photo
Sun 07/13/08 02:29 PM
Very nice, sweets flowers flowers

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Sun 07/13/08 03:38 PM

you are one of my favorite writersdrinker


I also agree! :thumbsup:

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Sun 07/13/08 11:01 PM
If i'm to put what i think out there i should expect to get what people think back. great write, thanks Jason.

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Mon 07/14/08 07:09 AM
very nice write:smile:

kc0003's photo
Mon 07/14/08 09:22 AM
Nicely done

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 07/14/08 06:32 PM
flowerforyou
Good write!