Topic: The Vision
Nova86's photo
Sat 07/12/08 10:02 PM
One day a man was walking around with his head in the sky,
A vision approached and caught his eye,
Beautiful, elegant, and radiant she commanded his attention,
The man reached out to embrace the vision,
With a playful smile she started to back away,
Like a moth to a flame he followed this woman not knowing what to say,
Staying just out of reach she continued on her way,
Looking back at him every so often to flash a smile,
Trying to catch the Vision everything was left behind all the while,
Never looking back to see everyone calling to stop him,
The man saw many years chasing her but only wasted them,
Suddenly the vision stopped moving away from the man,
Seizing this opportunity towards the vision he ran,
Out of the corner of his eye the man saw another person,
Before he could reach the vision she shot off in that direction,
The man watched as the vision and this new person began to embrace,
A weird emotion crossed him as tears fell down his face,
He realized that for him she was never truly there,
Leaving him cold, lonely and bare.


MirrorMirror's photo
Sat 07/12/08 10:04 PM
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d4tc's photo
Sat 07/12/08 11:33 PM
Nicely done. drinker

starlynsangel's photo
Sun 07/13/08 02:54 PM
wow...that was really beautiful...and so sad

Nova86's photo
Sun 07/13/08 06:19 PM
i am glad that you all liked it, just thought that i would try it out