it was about hree days back
oh my how great it was i'm not talking about joy and being happy i'm talking about the hurt in pain.......
so this is how it went down i was trying to end it all homeless and no ware to go life had broken me down
i ran it to a friend just a round that time..he said man when you going to be happy again i said when the rain stops
charlie and he siad will don't worry it will end soon about 4 days later it's still raining the sun jut won't shine i gess theres no happyness for me i was thinking to my self it's not worth the pain so as a got a big thick rope i tied it into a not and hung it from a stare case in friends house as he left me there so he could go out for a bit i thought i was losing my friend the world had turnd it's back on me.as i steeped up to end it all.then the phone had started to ring.so i siad to my self maybe one last call as i picked up the phone the most sweet of voices came over the phone she siad sweet heart don't move i'm coming to get you and we are going
home i thank the lord for looking down on me and saying son don't end it like this when u don't think anyone loves you just look up and say lord does an love me and i'll say yes be couse if no one ever loves u agian remeber i'm here and you will always be my son
as i walk out the door....and when back home oh it was pooring down the rain was heavy we pulled up in the drive was and all of the suden the rain stoped be couse for the first time in 4 years i was agian....

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