Topic: the opened will
jimz's photo
Sun 07/06/08 02:39 PM
Edited by jimz on Sun 07/06/08 02:40 PM
the sun
parting my eyes
in my time
the sun
is my armor
i cant explain
the fire of the soul
but i know the sun
i know

the fear
the carbon copy
fear

but i
see more

but only
one
attacks

and i
wake up

the sun
the h*ted fire
of one

i stay in
when it
burns

when it
bears
in

the fears

in my cave
in my head

who says
play deaad
memories
my fears
they say
will fade

but when
i play
deaad
i stay
deaad

even
when the
motherfuuckers
kiill
me

at least

i can
still

wake
up


LAMom's photo
Sun 07/06/08 03:29 PM

the sun
parting my eyes
in my time
the sun
is my armor
i cant explain
the fire of the soul
but i know the sun
i know

the fear
the carbon copy
fear

but i
see more

but only
one
attacks

and i
wake up

the sun
the h*ted fire
of one

i stay in
when it
burns

when it
bears
in

the fears

in my cave
in my head

who says
play deaad
memories
my fears
they say
will fade

but when
i play
deaad
i stay
deaad

even
when the
motherfuuckers
kiill
me

at least

i can
still

wake
up




Haunting and quite moving,,

((( Jimmy ))))
flowers

beauty314's photo
Sun 07/06/08 03:30 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

jimz's photo
Sun 07/06/08 03:59 PM
thank you, Denise, sweetie, and beauty314, I think of your name, and I feel no vanity, just a nice light.

d4tc's photo
Mon 07/07/08 10:56 AM
bigsmile drinker

Blurple's photo
Mon 07/07/08 11:51 AM
Killed only
within

Then replaced
with purity

Found by many
complete



Nice write! Beautiful!!!