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Do I miss you?
Oh, how I miss you: As the sun misses the dawn, As the waves miss the shore, As the leave miss their trees when the winter chill sets in. And, should all those things cease to exist, I would miss you all the more, For then I would have no words to describe How much I do so miss you. -me So, I need feedback. Tell me honestly; no jokes. |
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Its beautifull, cam I borrow it?
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Very nice!
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absolutely beautiful..from the heart..you have talent
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 I already borrowed this beautiful poem... I will send it to my son when he is in Iraq for 8 months..as I will send all the poems written for him or simply written.. Very beautiful....keep writing... 
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I only have talent when the spirit moves me. I've tried otherwise, and it's crap. Sure you can borrow, but don't say that you wrote it. That's stealing, not borrowing.
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I only have talent when the spirit moves me. I've tried otherwise, and it's crap. Sure you can borrow, but don't say that you wrote it. That's stealing, not borrowing. I ment to mention that I would tell my son you wrote this.I actually print it out so he will see your pic. I have a stack of letters and poetry from good ppl here who want me to send things to him... Like a care package...  Stealing vs borrowing..u r so correct..glad you wrote that....FYI's are great things...
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If you need a name to put on it(lemme see...what's a good screen name), you can call me Ray. And I hope your son makes it home safely.
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NO,NO,NO,I would never claim I wrote it, credit is due where it is deserved, you have the talent, you get the credit, Thanks. J
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Very beautifully written Bard
 Heartwarming, to say the very least
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