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ominous sky and opressive air
a literal translation of my mood waiting to burst, flashing rumbling, raining late century dreams are fading it's catching up and i'm falling behind |
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ominous sky and opressive air a literal translation of my mood waiting to burst, flashing rumbling, raining late century dreams are fading it's catching up and i'm falling behind 
I really like your style of writing,,, |
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"late century dreams are fading
it's catching up and i'm falling behind" A rich image redolent of Marvell's "time's wingéd chariot". Stark, simple - I like it. |
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lamom - thank you...my "style" comes from a sloppy and disorganized approach, but it works for me.
madamegeek - thank you also...i was aiming more for mac mccaughan in my approach, but i can definitely agree on the "simple" aspect. |
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