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Topic: Lockdown
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Fri 06/27/08 07:22 AM
If I lead gently
Will you follow
As I close my eyes
Swaying softly
Rhythmically
Moving us
To the music
Only I can hear?

Could you trust me
Enough to dance along?

If I stamp my feet
In frustrated
Overload
My childish
Petulance
Winning out
Over adult
Rationality
Trying your
Patience and
Goodwill

Can you love me
Despite and inspite
Of myself?

When I break down
And weep
Like a wounded
Child broken
And lost
Feeling I’ve
Nowhere to run
But into your arms

Will you help me
Find my way?

If I seduce
Mesmerize
Hypnotize
Paralyze and
Capture you
With mysterious
Mata Hari charms
Leaving you
Breathless
With desire
Will you be
My slave?

Could you still find
sweet release
in the little girl
inside me?

If I open my heart
And let you see
My fears
My sorrow
My dreams of
Tomorrow
And the scars
I bear from all
My yesterdays

Would you be able
To see past my
Many flaws?

Will you listen
To my silent words
Unspoken
Will you catch the
Smile in my tears
Can you love
The many women
You see in my eyes

And still look upon me
With a loving glance?

Can I be all I am
And all I’ve been
All I want to be
Can I feel free
To be me
When I’m with you?

Or do I remain
In lock down?

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Fri 06/27/08 07:29 AM
drinker drinker drinker flowerforyou

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Fri 06/27/08 07:29 AM
Expose/Shine/Share/LIVE!!flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

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Fri 06/27/08 07:34 AM

drinker drinker drinker flowerforyou


Thank you....:heart:

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Fri 06/27/08 07:34 AM

Expose/Shine/Share/LIVE!!flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou


Oh I LIKE that cy! :heart:

Greg65's photo
Fri 06/27/08 07:39 AM
could you do the same for me:cry: :cry:

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Fri 06/27/08 08:00 AM
Unseal and reveal
The beautiful me
For all to see


flowers :banana: flowers

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Sat 06/28/08 08:42 AM

could you do the same for me:cry: :cry:


Oh Greg, truth will be revealed when the time is right for you flowerforyou :heart:

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Sat 06/28/08 08:43 AM

Unseal and reveal
The beautiful me
For all to see


flowers :banana: flowers


pk your beauty shines through line a beacon...:heart:

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Sat 06/28/08 09:07 AM
Awww, thanks Ms. Wiz - you tooblushing flowerforyou

Noden's photo
Sat 06/28/08 02:03 PM
flowers Mawwwwwwh!!! my sexy friend long time no see, but wanted to let you know your poetry alway's excites me!smitten hope your fine...wishes in the stars for my friend to always have the brightess smiles...flowers flowers :banana: :banana:

tearsofblood666's photo
Sat 06/28/08 02:32 PM
cute bigsmile

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Sun 06/29/08 12:10 AM

Awww, thanks Ms. Wiz - you tooblushing flowerforyou



thank you love bug :heart:

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Sun 06/29/08 12:10 AM

flowers Mawwwwwwh!!! my sexy friend long time no see, but wanted to let you know your poetry alway's excites me!smitten hope your fine...wishes in the stars for my friend to always have the brightess smiles...flowers flowers :banana: :banana:


Hello Gorgeous Girl where have you BEEN???? I miss you~:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

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Sun 06/29/08 12:11 AM

cute bigsmile


grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr:heart:

LAMom's photo
Sun 06/29/08 12:44 AM
:heart: Ms Wiz :heart:

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Sun 06/29/08 12:47 AM

:heart: Ms Wiz :heart:


:heart: :heart: (((Denise))) :heart: :heart:

Noden's photo
Sun 06/29/08 09:26 AM


flowers Mawwwwwwh!!! my sexy friend long time no see, but wanted to let you know your poetry alway's excites me!smitten hope your fine...wishes in the stars for my friend to always have the brightess smiles...flowers flowers :banana: :banana:


Hello Gorgeous Girl where have you BEEN???? I miss you~:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:


I miss you too, lovely lady, how's you been, Iam fine and doing so much better, I had to comment on your beautiful write, I don't come in often but it's nice to be able to check in once and a while to say hi...I haven't written much lately, but one day plan to do some more, everyone here are doing an excellent job at writting.
I am so impressed with all the talent I've seen...anyhow woman you take care.
I'll visit again real soon...:heart: :banana: flowers

AngelLight's photo
Sun 06/29/08 11:10 AM
MsWiz...flowerforyou

What can I tell you but your write is excellent...it flows so nicely, and it's so heartfelt....:heart: drinker

kc0003's photo
Sun 06/29/08 10:36 PM
lockdown huh?

good to see that your words are not confined
i hope the rest of your being soon follows

flowerforyou flowers flowerforyou

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