Topic: hmm...
gracebabez916's photo
Fri 06/27/08 01:49 AM


ME

My love for you is getting weak,I've been ignoring you and not letting you speak.

I used to care soo much about you,but now i make all my decisions without you.

I look at you and I see every imperfection,and sometimes i mock you because of your unclear complextion.

My worst enemy is what you are indeed,yet your the only one who stays with me in every single time of need.

My feelings for you are often grim,sometimes its hard for me to see you from within.

I never stand up for you, like i wish i could learn to do.

I watch as people hurt you again and again causing you endless pain,and sometimes i think ive lost you but God shows me you still remain.

A temple is what you are to me,representing God and all his true beauty.

I know ive failed on my part,because ive left you with nothing but a broken heart.

At times i try to show the world that your still here,but my description of you has become so unclear.

So to let you know how much you mean,ill show the world that were still a team.

I'll pray to God from deep within,that he'll help me learn to love me once again.


darkowl1's photo
Fri 06/27/08 02:06 AM
it's the way we learn sweet. we only begin to know ourselves a little more through longer periods of time, and when we think we have a grasp, we pass on to another realm, and learn even more. not neccessarily flowers and clouds for all. thank the powers that be for that, for i would surely go insane.

atleedagod's photo
Fri 06/27/08 02:13 AM
Edited by atleedagod on Fri 06/27/08 02:20 AM
looks like most of the stuff ive been writing down

hell if i had the courage to show the true sighing and frowns

while it rots away in a notebook in the the darkest corner

yet i cant help but think the thoughts where my heart is torn for her




decided to contribute :smile:

Spaceman2008's photo
Fri 06/27/08 02:19 AM
Edited by Spaceman2008 on Fri 06/27/08 02:19 AM



ME

My love for you is getting weak,I've been ignoring you and not letting you speak.

I used to care soo much about you,but now i make all my decisions without you.

I look at you and I see every imperfection,and sometimes i mock you because of your unclear complextion.

My worst enemy is what you are indeed,yet your the only one who stays with me in every single time of need.

My feelings for you are often grim,sometimes its hard for me to see you from within.

I never stand up for you, like i wish i could learn to do.

I watch as people hurt you again and again causing you endless pain,and sometimes i think ive lost you but God shows me you still remain.

A temple is what you are to me,representing God and all his true beauty.

I know ive failed on my part,because ive left you with nothing but a broken heart.

At times i try to show the world that your still here,but my description of you has become so unclear.

So to let you know how much you mean,ill show the world that were still a team.

I'll pray to God from deep within,that he'll help me learn to love me once again.




If you wrote that to me, I would SO be on your doorstep with a bunch of flowers!! flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

hikerchick's photo
Fri 06/27/08 04:09 AM
why isn't this in the poetry forum?