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Topic: I wrote this the day my husband passed away
destinie Joined Fri 03/28/08 Posts: 12	Wed 06/25/08 11:29 PM
I'll See You Forever In the warm hues of dawn that welcome a new day. In the morning dew that mist all that is green. In the soft rain that brings the color of spring to life. In the sun ripened wheat that that sways rhythmically in the field. In the song of the babbling brook that sings for all to hear. In the comforting whisper of the wind through golden leaves. In the silver glow of the first snow that blankets the land. In the warmth of the sun that frees us from the cold. In the flight of the eagle that freely glides on the breeze. In the branches of the mighty oak that protects all that is near. In the fading light of day that welcomes in the peaceful night. In the stars that sparkle bright in the dark silky sky. In the mystic glow of the full moon that guides us into sweet dreams. You are gone in body, not in spirit. I'll see you every day in the wold around me. Your love will be with us forever.

lgo Joined Sun 03/16/08 Posts: 1824	Wed 06/25/08 11:29 PM


rush2001 Joined Thu 04/17/08 Posts: 2577	Wed 06/25/08 11:30 PM
That is beautiful and I am so sorry to hear a bout you're husband.

Max_Darkling Joined Sat 03/29/08 Posts: 1166	Wed 06/25/08 11:32 PM


LIJOMA Joined Wed 01/09/08 Posts: 2591	Wed 06/25/08 11:51 PM


rodfcutler Joined Sun 10/21/07 Posts: 1645	Wed 06/25/08 11:52 PM
I'll See You Forever In the warm hues of dawn that welcome a new day. In the morning dew that mist all that is green. In the soft rain that brings the color of spring to life. In the sun ripened wheat that that sways rhythmically in the field. In the song of the babbling brook that sings for all to hear. In the comforting whisper of the wind through golden leaves. In the silver glow of the first snow that blankets the land. In the warmth of the sun that frees us from the cold. In the flight of the eagle that freely glides on the breeze. In the branches of the mighty oak that protects all that is near. In the fading light of day that welcomes in the peaceful night. In the stars that sparkle bright in the dark silky sky. In the mystic glow of the full moon that guides us into sweet dreams. You are gone in body, not in spirit. I'll see you every day in the wold around me. Your love will be with us forever. My sentiments exactly,sorry about your loss,any loss is very painful and I wish you all the moral support I can offer you! Take Care and may God bless you!

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 06/26/08 08:09 AM
May you also always hear and feel him within the gentle whisperings of your own heart

chuck366 Joined Tue 10/16/07 Posts: 4666	Thu 06/26/08 08:10 AM


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destinie Joined Fri 03/28/08 Posts: 12	Fri 06/27/08 03:13 PM
Thanks everyone.

TwilightsTwin Joined Tue 04/10/07 Posts: 11054	Fri 06/27/08 05:30 PM
Beautiful write

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Wed 07/02/08 12:01 AM
That was a beautiful sentiment to your husband. You will hear his voice in the whispering winds, his heartbeat in Gods creation and his soul will always envelope you with his presence.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 07/02/08 10:03 AM
Allways around us and in our hearts... Nice dedication to your husband!

destinie Joined Fri 03/28/08 Posts: 12	Thu 07/03/08 12:21 PM
Thanks wolfeyes, msteddybear2u, and all the rest of you. Your words mean allot to me. Destinies.

Britty Joined Sat 09/08/07 Posts: 3480	Thu 07/03/08 02:07 PM
A beautiful tribute to your husband. I hope the wonderful memories you made together, his presence in spirit and your family will always be a comfort and a reminder of the love you shared together.

LightVoice Joined Thu 08/09/07 Posts: 7405	Thu 07/03/08 02:16 PM
I am first & foremost very sorry for your loss.. I know this pain. This was absolutely beautiful.. thank you so much for sharing it with us. I recently made it thru the 1 yr anniversary of the loss of my fiancee... your words felt as if they were taken from my very soul. Thank you