Topic: The river flows into undiscovered land (poem)
afro's photo
Wed 06/25/08 09:46 PM
The river flows into undiscovered land.
See there how it turns at the bend?!
It hurries not, but gently passes
Perhaps saying hello to the nearby grasses
Or perhaps conversing with the breeze,
Which speaks of nothing but the trees.
Filled with wisdom from all it has heard on its way
The river gives its knowledge to its brother—the Bay.

(feel free to make suggestions for improvement)

afro

SAEgirl10's photo
Wed 06/25/08 09:48 PM
wow very good