Topic: Numb
DeathsTreaty's photo
Wed 06/25/08 12:32 PM
My blood runs thin
the feeling in my hands is gone
I can no longer feel the ground or know where my body plans to take me
My right hand reached for a pen
and my left reached for a rusted blade
My mind embeded and twisted to thoughts that continue to confuse me
Feeling is lost in my lips
and I can no longer feel what I am to say
Am I not held responsable for what may seap from my lips?
Am I feeling tears?
or is this warmth of my own blood?
What am I to think?
Who am I to know what will come of embrassing and letting as my mind wants?
Am I right to question myself?
A fallen one of hope and a product of pain
this is all that my mind will let me hear

ljcc1964's photo
Wed 06/25/08 12:34 PM
Way to cheer us up...

LAMom's photo
Wed 06/25/08 12:34 PM

My blood runs thin
the feeling in my hands is gone
I can no longer feel the ground or know where my body plans to take me
My right hand reached for a pen
and my left reached for a rusted blade
My mind embeded and twisted to thoughts that continue to confuse me
Feeling is lost in my lips
and I can no longer feel what I am to say
Am I not held responsable for what may seap from my lips?
Am I feeling tears?
or is this warmth of my own blood?
What am I to think?
Who am I to know what will come of embrassing and letting as my mind wants?
Am I right to question myself?
A fallen one of hope and a product of pain
this is all that my mind will let me hear


<<<<< Whispers back,, breathe and exhale,, Life is full of moments that we at times don't understand,,, Close your eyes
Re-think,, Re-Listen,,, Re-Live flowerforyou

bluesunflower's photo
Wed 06/25/08 12:34 PM
good write, death.


keep it flowing.


hugs flowerforyou

Etrain's photo
Wed 06/25/08 12:35 PM
wheres the pink at DT???

DeathsTreaty's photo
Wed 06/25/08 12:40 PM
Im not feeling to pink at the moment

but I think it will be back up later ^^


Thanx for reading Everyone