Topic: My Gift to You
Slytle90's photo
Mon 06/23/08 10:56 PM
This was for two of my really good friends.

On this day
You will recieve from me,
couples counseling...
for a couple like you,
so one in a million,
must stay together forever.

Love so strong,
keeps them coming back
after every single fight,
keeping those
"I miss you's"
"stars in starry eyes"
...on replay in the mind.
Like that annoying sound,
when your cd skips,
and you want it to go away,
but you just sit there,
Stupidly starring at the sound
wondering what's next,
and then of course you realise that there
is nothing next,
because you havn't let go of what is.

By not letting go you wont just be missin
those late night licks and
midnight blows...
this would be taking a part of your soul!
Those fire filled hugs
and electric kisses...
those are the things you'd be missin.

The electricity of love,
at the finger tips...
when they touch,
bring back the memories of
things being thrown,
and things being said...
All those,
"I hate you's,"
and "Stupid Whore's"
eat away at your heart,
and thoughts
and dreams,
untill the day you confess of
the jewel in your heart
with an undying furnace of
Love,
Loyality,
and Respect...

What people don't seem to get,
is that on the outsidem,
they might not look too pleased,
but behind the stubborn wall of
fear and pride,
there are valleys of love...
rivers of lust...
the red woods, being the will to hold on,
the gravity-the connection,
keeps them going on.

Don't deny
the truth in your heart,
the heart that the world sees so easily...

Knock down that stubborn wall
of ear and pride,
and see whats there to be seen.

d4tc's photo
Mon 06/23/08 11:16 PM
Powerful Write. flowerforyou happy

chevylover1965's photo
Mon 06/23/08 11:17 PM
flowerforyou

calmguy3's photo
Mon 06/23/08 11:29 PM
ooh ooh
i want to frolic in the valleys of love...
and swim in the
rivers of lust
and then dry myself
with a towel of satisfaction

LOL

Nice write :wink: flowerforyou

Slytle90's photo
Wed 06/25/08 04:01 PM
Thanks you guys for your comments! They are greatly appriciated!