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Topic: Alone
FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Mon 06/23/08 08:43 PM
All alone I sit My life is one dark empty pit No one around to see me cry No one around to hear my screams I feel so alone and helpless I feel so unworthy to be loved by you My tears are falling hot and heavy on my cheeks showing all who think i'm tough,that I am really quite weak.

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Mon 06/23/08 08:44 PM
aaww. Very nice write.

Etrain Joined Wed 11/21/07 Posts: 19684	Mon 06/23/08 08:45 PM


CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Mon 06/23/08 08:46 PM


beauty314 Joined Sat 04/19/08 Posts: 1709	Mon 06/23/08 08:47 PM
sweeeet

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Mon 06/23/08 08:48 PM
awww..faith, not true! you have more strength than you know.

Cinderella75 Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 10049	Mon 06/23/08 08:48 PM
All alone I sit My life is one dark empty pit No one around to see me cry No one around to hear my screams I feel so alone and helpless I feel so unworthy to be loved by you My tears are falling hot and heavy on my cheeks showing all who think i'm tough,that I am really quite weak. Gosh I wish I could write Poetry..one section in the creativity department that I have not mastered yet.

MYheartACHES4u Joined Tue 05/27/08 Posts: 3076	Mon 06/23/08 08:48 PM
i'm here for you

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Mon 06/23/08 08:55 PM
((d4tc))thank you ((Etrain)) thank you ((Cy)) thank you ((beauty)) thank you ((Bastet)) thanks girl ((Cinderella)) you could if you tried..it's not hard! ((alan)) I know sweets..mwaah

calmguy3 Joined Fri 05/23/08 Posts: 393	Mon 06/23/08 10:10 PM


FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Mon 06/23/08 10:27 PM
((calmguy))

chevylover1965 Joined Sat 09/29/07 Posts: 43370	Mon 06/23/08 10:28 PM
me too my friend ,

FaithfulOne78 Joined Mon 11/19/07 Posts: 15313	Mon 06/23/08 10:44 PM
me too my friend , ((chevy))

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