Topic: Give Me Your Hate
d4tc's photo
Mon 06/23/08 05:48 PM
Thanks Ho
For all you know
I'm better now
Better off
Without you
On me
Throwing your
Negativity
My way
Heeeeeeey
That was great
Sarcasm
dripping
I escape
Your hate
Life is better
Accepting fate

If I was an alcoholic
I would have drank
myself to death
with no shame

If I was a crackhead
I'd torch rocks in your name

If I was suicidal
I woulda put a bullet in my brain

In my brain
In my brain

I stab the pen to the pad
When I think of you
I can only get mad
I'd rather get slapped around
by my own dad
Then blow out my own brain
because of what we had

Heres the gun again hun
do me a fave
Pull the trigger babe
Life can be a drag
I need help
Think you can do it
Screw it
Just do it!
Use the old ring finger
The one you let linger
Full of liessssss

Thanks Ho
For the evil eyessssss
Comforting
Sleepless nightssssss
And times I've cried
Gloria Gaynor said
I will survive

I

WILL

SURVIVE!

Hard to believe
When decieved

Either way
Infidelity
Wasn't working
In my favor
Feeling pinned
Like our savior
Everything I eat
Stale taste
Lacking flavor

Like last year
Looking back with no fear
I can see clear and clearly
Eyes once blurry
No longer need to worry
Stationary hearts can be scary

Thanks Ho
Floating like a fairy
Fell in love
Popped her cherry
And what do you know
We landed in hate
I'm Loving it!
Sarcastically
Accepting Fate

Treated her like a Saint
To never violate
When she bent over
Toward me to deficate
Over our marital state
OUR life she just raped
From ME for WE
No more

Thanks Ho
I confess
Happy to let you go
But as you can see
I still feel that blow

I still feel that blow
I still feel that blow

Yes Ho

I still feel that blow

beautyfrompain's photo
Mon 06/23/08 05:50 PM
One Word .... Forgiveness.... such a wonderful thing!

beautyfrompain's photo
Mon 06/23/08 06:00 PM
So many words I would like to say to my soon to be ex, but words kill and I've murdered enough. Bitterness will eat you like a cancer. Pray you find forgiveness and peace. Whatsoever a man soweth that shall he reap also. Have a good evening.

bastet126's photo
Mon 06/23/08 06:01 PM
when a heart can make another feel the blow, that's talent. another true write! flowerforyou flowerforyou

d4tc's photo
Mon 06/23/08 06:03 PM
Thanks for all the kind words. Much appreciated.

flowerforyou beautyfrompain (nice name)
flowerforyou bastet126

calmguy3's photo
Mon 06/23/08 07:35 PM
Truly a great consonance piece
drinker flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou drinker

beauty314's photo
Mon 06/23/08 08:24 PM
feel it..very niceflowerforyou

Slytle90's photo
Mon 06/23/08 10:33 PM
Wow...I just read that twice, i LOVE it. I like the honesty that it expresses, a very nice write!flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

no photo
Tue 06/24/08 09:38 AM
Powerful writing on the aftermath of emotions of divorce. Time moves on and eventually we work through the pain and look forward to the life on the other side.flowerforyou flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Tue 06/24/08 09:46 AM
:cry: :heart:


For your dear and tender heart...flowers at your feet flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 06/24/08 10:27 AM
'CHU do what'chu do so well!