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Edited by
d4tc
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Sun 06/22/08 12:47 PM
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I've skipped stones the weight of boulders across lakes made out of iceeeee
Dropping crips and bloods on green felt blowing throwing rolling diceeeee Now I stood for what I stand for and I ain'st stood nothing lesssssss I've even stood when I got jumped in school with six fists on my chessssssst Heaving weazing barely breathing bones aching filled with stressssss Hardly feeling healing seeing bruises fading back to fleshhhhhh |
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This is one of the best pieces I've read on this forum. You're really talented. Honestly.
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I've skipped stones the weight of boulders across lakes made out of iceeeee Dropping crips and bloods on green felt blowing throwing rolling diceeeee Now I stood for what I stand for and I ain'st stood nothing lesssssss I've even stood when I got jumped in school with six fists on my chessssssst Heaving weazing barely breathing bones aching filled with stressssss Hardly feeling healing seeing bruises fading back to fleshhhhhh I like this. I envision it being orated by a beatnik with a bongo in the background at a coffeehouse. |
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Nice.
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