Topic: Taking Chances
d4tc's photo
Sun 06/22/08 12:45 PM
Edited by d4tc on Sun 06/22/08 12:47 PM
I've skipped stones the weight of boulders across lakes made out of iceeeee

Dropping crips and bloods on green felt blowing throwing rolling diceeeee

Now I stood for what I stand for and I ain'st stood nothing lesssssss

I've even stood when I got jumped in school with six fists on my chessssssst

Heaving weazing barely breathing bones aching filled with stressssss

Hardly feeling healing seeing bruises fading back to fleshhhhhh







Danielaaaaa's photo
Sun 06/22/08 12:50 PM
This is one of the best pieces I've read on this forum. You're really talented. Honestly.

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Sun 06/22/08 12:52 PM

I've skipped stones the weight of boulders across lakes made out of iceeeee

Dropping crips and bloods on green felt blowing throwing rolling diceeeee

Now I stood for what I stand for and I ain'st stood nothing lesssssss

I've even stood when I got jumped in school with six fists on my chessssssst

Heaving weazing barely breathing bones aching filled with stressssss

Hardly feeling healing seeing bruises fading back to fleshhhhhh




I like this. I envision it being orated by a beatnik with a bongo in the background at a coffeehouse. drinker

Army_Strong's photo
Sun 06/22/08 12:52 PM
Nice. drinker