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Topic: Critique my novel's opening pages.
Abracadabra's photo
Thu 06/19/08 06:10 PM

What if Todd turns out to be a mechanic?????????


The story spans 6 years from 1955 to 1961. Cathy grows from 12 to 18 (legal adult). It's key that she becomes of legal age in 1961 for reasons I won't tell. bigsmile

Todd grows from 14 to 20 over the same period of time. Twenty is too young to become a full-fleged veternary doctor. But he does graduate H.S. and is well on his way toward this goal. He's working as a veternary assistent by the end of the book. (me bad giving away the whole story. laugh )

Of course there's a lot more to the story than this. It's an extremely complex story actually. Extremely complex. :wink:

Abracadabra's photo
Thu 06/19/08 06:12 PM

Abra,,, I have read it twice since yesturday,, and each time I want more,, You have an incredible mind and I enjoy your work,,I do hope that one day I can add your Book (s) to my collection,,

flowerforyou


Thank you very much for your kind words and inspiration.

There are 30 chapters in my book. At my current rate of writing I might have it finished in 30 years. laugh

But I must confess that your words here do inspire me to go write on it ASAP. bigsmile

LAMom's photo
Thu 06/19/08 09:14 PM
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I've been gone for ohhhhhhhhhhhh lets say 6 hours,, and still the book is not finished... lol,,, sheshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh how long does a mom have to wait,,,

I wish you the best Abra,,, and will be honored to read the final product,,,

flowerforyou

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