Topic: Critique my novel's opening pages. | |
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What if Todd turns out to be a mechanic????????? The story spans 6 years from 1955 to 1961. Cathy grows from 12 to 18 (legal adult). It's key that she becomes of legal age in 1961 for reasons I won't tell. ![]() Todd grows from 14 to 20 over the same period of time. Twenty is too young to become a full-fleged veternary doctor. But he does graduate H.S. and is well on his way toward this goal. He's working as a veternary assistent by the end of the book. (me bad giving away the whole story. ![]() Of course there's a lot more to the story than this. It's an extremely complex story actually. Extremely complex. ![]() |
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Abra,,, I have read it twice since yesturday,, and each time I want more,, You have an incredible mind and I enjoy your work,,I do hope that one day I can add your Book (s) to my collection,, ![]() Thank you very much for your kind words and inspiration. There are 30 chapters in my book. At my current rate of writing I might have it finished in 30 years. ![]() But I must confess that your words here do inspire me to go write on it ASAP. ![]() |
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I've been gone for ohhhhhhhhhhhh lets say 6 hours,, and still the book is not finished... lol,,, sheshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh how long does a mom have to wait,,,
I wish you the best Abra,,, and will be honored to read the final product,,, ![]() |
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