the everlasting moon

how i have grown to become such an universal infant
baptized with my spiritual scars
who can turn on his back
and float in the moonlight and the sacred pool of ageless stars

the ageless stars

with my eyes closed and my spirit open
i see them in my mind
how can there be so many now
where o where is all of our infinite time

the infinite time

tomorrow i must hunt for more of it
after my liquid night swim is all done
till the tide goes out on the darkness
leaving the brilliant sands of the eternal sun

the eternal sun

when it is ended when it is over
when all hope has fled with all doom
I once again will strip naked like us all
And float into the light of the everlasting moon

the everlasting moon

Our ageless spirits, our ageless universe...very interesting poem. I
like the way you write.

thank you venusrose... nice name by the way

Another good one Poeticwolf.

nice one keep on writing I enjoy them.

mmmm - yea, good beat, I think it could be a song, I'd give it an 8.
Only because to say it's a 10 doesn't leave room for anything better you
have in store for us.