Topic: Need help...Need a poem
Torylynn's photo
Mon 06/16/08 04:16 PM
I need a poem about love, honesty, loyalty, and allthe good things about being in love..The moments are out of this world and so is the touch, the kiss, the embrace...all this need to be somehow tied into it...

I am in love with someone I met off here...but we are not able to see each other due to some trouble they got in...I need something that is touching and heartfelt...I fell this person like I said I would never fall for someone..He knocked down that wall...He holds the key...Can someone please help me out...torylynn

d4tc's photo
Mon 06/16/08 04:17 PM
I recommend MsWiz or AngelLight.

They are specialists in this field. :wink: :tongue:

hikerchick's photo
Mon 06/16/08 04:17 PM
How much does the job pay?

jimz's photo
Mon 06/16/08 04:19 PM

I recommend MsWiz or AngelLight.

They are specialists in this field. :wink: :tongue:


i agree, a humble fan

grneyedldy1967's photo
Mon 06/16/08 04:19 PM
Your hands around my waist.
Your gentle warm embrace.
It feels like I'm in heaven;
I don't want to leave this place.

Your lips upon my own,
Soft and full of bliss
You make my heart race
When you give me just one kiss

Its something about you
And the things that you do.
My days are so much brighter
And its all because of you.

You make me so happy
Than ever before.
Theres so much about you
That I truly adore;
With a glance of your face
And the sound of your voice
This once saddened heart
Is now filled with rejoice.
Its the little things you do
that puts a smile on my face
And its all because of you
That my heart begins to race

Ive finally found happiness
After all Ive been through
I wake up with a smile
And its all thanks to you.

no photo
Mon 06/16/08 04:19 PM
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d4tc's photo
Mon 06/16/08 04:24 PM

Your hands around my waist.
Your gentle warm embrace.
It feels like I'm in heaven;
I don't want to leave this place.

Your lips upon my own,
Soft and full of bliss
You make my heart race
When you give me just one kiss

Its something about you
And the things that you do.
My days are so much brighter
And its all because of you.

You make me so happy
Than ever before.
Theres so much about you
That I truly adore;
With a glance of your face
And the sound of your voice
This once saddened heart
Is now filled with rejoice.
Its the little things you do
that puts a smile on my face
And its all because of you
That my heart begins to race

Ive finally found happiness
After all Ive been through
I wake up with a smile
And its all thanks to you.



This will do! laugh bigsmile Very Nice! I think you captured the whole ambience of the request. laugh

Torylynn's photo
Mon 06/16/08 04:58 PM
Thank you greeneyed...I think that will be just fine....you got away with words...


Wolfeyes58's photo
Tue 06/17/08 07:03 AM

Thank you greeneyed...I think that will be just fine....you got away with words...


So are you satisfied with greeneyed's beautiful poem? She did a wonderful job.

Torylynn's photo
Tue 06/17/08 11:26 AM
Yes I am wolf....It is in the mail now...It resembles everything...and touches the heart...she is good...it made my girlfriend tear up...but under the circumstance yes I love it...hopefully the person it was written for will to..drinker drinker