Topic: some thoughts
jimz's photo
Sun 06/15/08 03:20 PM
Edited by jimz on Sun 06/15/08 03:25 PM
as tropical
as cancer
and noble
like capricorn
like a rainbow on a star
fortune was dispersered
on the sons of god
and as they get older
their sons become sons
faith was first
a whisper wish
by an angel
who saw a
human cry
i hear myself
and i may hear god
and may not know it
but i hear love
and isn't
that
hearing
god

beauty314's photo
Sun 06/15/08 03:32 PM
whisper wish..ahhhhhhhlove

jimz's photo
Sun 06/15/08 04:03 PM
thank you, beauty314, I always have trouble spelling beauty, but I think you cured that :heart:

no photo
Sun 06/15/08 11:02 PM
very niceflowerforyou flowerforyou

calmguy3's photo
Sun 06/15/08 11:08 PM
as tropical
as cancer
and noble
like capricorn

o i like that piece.


thank God & his angels for wishes whispered

for without them where would i be.

nice piece

d4tc's photo
Sun 06/15/08 11:39 PM
glasses drinker

no photo
Sun 06/15/08 11:55 PM
drinker :wink: :heart: Nice write Jimmy..Be YOU man, and have fun here in these walls of rhyme and time...drinker

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 06/16/08 11:46 AM
Love it all Jimmy but this piece

i hear myself
and i may hear god
and may not know it
but i hear love
and isn't
that
hearing
god


is really touching to me!!flowerforyou flowerforyou