Topic: Only A Child
I_am_Tater's photo
Fri 06/13/08 01:08 PM
He's only thirteen
Yet he walks and talks like hes twenty-one
He doesn't care what we think of him
Respect is non-existent
I've seen the way he looks at her
It makes my blood boil
Is he serious?
She's only thirteen
He made her dinner last night
Not a big deal I suppose
Still he makes me nervous
She's still a child
Full of innocence
So pure...
Every time they're together I fear it may change
He runs with older boys
Belts are against his religion
And I guess he hasn't noticed he's white
He's only thirteen
The path he's headed down will be a hard road to hoe
As long as he doesn't take my sister
I don't much care
Shes still a child
So full of innocence
For now...

myssfytz's photo
Fri 06/13/08 01:17 PM
nice, but umm....the line about " And i guess he hasnt noticed he's white" ???

what exactly ARE you trying to say there ?huh


I_am_Tater's photo
Fri 06/13/08 01:19 PM

nice, but umm....the line about " And i guess he hasnt noticed he's white" ???

what exactly ARE you trying to say there ?huh




he talks like hes snoop dogg or somethin...not even my black friends like him lol

I_am_Tater's photo
Fri 06/13/08 01:22 PM


nice, but umm....the line about " And i guess he hasnt noticed he's white" ???

what exactly ARE you trying to say there ?huh


its a damn poem so dont get all flipped out the kids a thug end of story

AngelLight's photo
Fri 06/13/08 03:24 PM
Childhood innocence is so fleeting....

May your sister have what is hers for as long as she can keep it.....:heart: