Standing in solitude
in her lonely world
she stares out the window
at the city
people rushing to and fro
some sad and others witty
music plays in the background
a song both soft and slow
as her heart breaks in the darkness
her body sways and she lets go

let her dance

Tears are falling from her eyes
sliding down her beautiful face
She wonders why she is all alone
here in her private place
she could open the door and let them in
those people rushing by
but instead she's here in solitude
thinking feeling wondering as she cries

let her dance

what traps her in the darkness
is it fear or maybe more
she's tried before and failed
she's certain she knows the score
so there she stands alone
her body pounding out the beat
as she watches life
outside her window
passing her by
right on the street

let her dance

Very Good Write.

Dancing!

nice

Very very nice!!!
"Dance"

Thanks one and all you know you are all my favorite critics

Simply Beautiful..........epitomizes the very soul of a woman hurt one too many times, afraid to allow her heart to re-enter the world thereby protecting it so she doesn't get hurt......... Incredible .....

Neat...love the juxtaposition of "let her dance" with the write as a whole

Maybe dancing will breathe new life into her so she will open the door again.

Thank you ladies...you are too kind...


If anyone here writes music I would love to have some tracks laid to this one. I no longer have a keyboard to do it for myself