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Topic: my rose
Intrepid00 Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 269	Wed 06/11/08 12:50 PM
between these two poles, on my knees I stand lamenting the night I last held your hand, you were my rose, in this crown of thorns, ironic, I can't see your face, not anymore. I only remember, the perfect shape of your legs, and I'm now resigned to accept what I've known all along, even though you've denied me, and you're apathetic as grass I always loved you, and I always will. -to Amy

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Wed 06/11/08 01:48 PM
Heartfelt

feistybaby Joined Fri 04/25/08 Posts: 2422	Wed 06/11/08 01:50 PM
Very lucky lady to have a love so true ...beautiful devotional to your feelings....great job~

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Wed 06/11/08 02:31 PM
nice write!

Intrepid00 Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 269	Thu 06/12/08 09:52 AM
Very lucky lady to have a love so true ...beautiful devotional to your feelings....great job~ Thank you. I wish Amy felt so lucky to have me love her. She wont even talk about me let alone to me

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Thu 06/12/08 10:09 AM
Nicely oh so nicely done. Wild roses despise pruning!

pkd1220 Joined Thu 05/24/07 Posts: 8318	Thu 06/12/08 10:16 AM
Showing lots of emotion. Great job.

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Thu 06/12/08 12:22 PM
Nice Visual.

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 06/12/08 12:23 PM
Nice write!

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