Topic: ADRIFT
feistybaby's photo
Tue 06/10/08 04:33 PM
a lone bottle floats along the crest
tossed from wave to wave always abreast
on a journey to the shore
hoping to be found, claimed, and more
inside the bottle is a note
curled with care and covered in dust motes
A letter written full of love,then tossed on a wave
with a sorrowful sigh soft as the coo of a dove
the secrets of a heart untold
but written here for someone to behold
who will find it? will they care
That a love so true could not be dared
told only to the wind and waves
love not for the timid, only the brave


LIJOMA's photo
Tue 06/10/08 04:35 PM

a lone bottle floats along the crest
tossed from wave to wave always abreast
on a journey to the shore
hoping to be found, claimed, and more
inside the bottle is a note
curled with care and covered in dust motes
A letter written full of love,then tossed on a wave
with a sorrowful sigh soft as the coo of a dove
the secrets of a heart untold
but written here for someone to behold
who will find it? will they care
That a love so true could not be dared
told only to the wind and waves
love not for the timid, only the brave






flowerforyou nice

brian325's photo
Tue 06/10/08 04:35 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou love love flowerforyou flowerforyou

Polly123's photo
Tue 06/10/08 04:37 PM
Wow::cry: :cry: :cry:

feistybaby's photo
Tue 06/10/08 04:55 PM

Wow::cry: :cry: :cry:


I didn't mean to make you cry polly~

AngelLight's photo
Tue 06/10/08 04:59 PM
Sooo beautiful feisty flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 06/10/08 05:27 PM
:smile: flowerforyou Nice!

feistybaby's photo
Wed 06/11/08 01:33 PM
Ty all so much and for taking the time to read my labors of love...I appreciate it~ flowerforyou

Wolfeyes58's photo
Wed 06/11/08 01:38 PM
Very good indeed. I liked it. Keep it up.