Topic: deaad men cant do ****
jimz's photo
Sun 06/08/08 01:42 PM
Edited by jimz on Sun 06/08/08 01:43 PM
pop pop
goes the
wall shot

pop pop
hes deaad
on the wall

propped up
there
since he
operated on
his clipped
wings

pop pop
men who
shoot
bullets
get better
and better

pop pop
just a
flesh wound

goes rotten
goes insane

pop pop
they got
her
down

pop pop
one with
his gun up

pop pop
fuuck man
who you
shootin at

im trying
to kill god
our only
witness

bro
deaad men

cant hurt
shiit

kirk443's photo
Sun 06/08/08 01:48 PM
unless they come back as a ghost to haunt youlaugh

no photo
Sun 06/08/08 01:54 PM
To be gone forever, to never be no more. To never BE again.
Cast from this plain to another,that dude will never hurt any
OTHER. Just another poor dead brother,lifes a mother******!

Great words to start the wheels inside my head.
Thinking and realizing 'dead'.

Nice write Jimmy!!!!drinker

jimz's photo
Sun 06/08/08 01:55 PM
peace, Terry

Jimmy

calmguy3's photo
Sun 06/08/08 03:18 PM
funny piece
drinker drinker
we may have to put god in
a Witness Protection Program
to keep him invisible
oh wait
i think he's already in one of those programs
The compound i here has a giant set of golden gates out front
:wink: :wink: :smile:
:smile: :wink: :wink:

jimz's photo
Sun 06/08/08 03:34 PM

funny piece
drinker drinker
we may have to put god in
a Witness Protection Program
to keep him invisible
oh wait
i think he's already in one of those programs
The compound i here has a giant set of golden gates out front
:wink: :wink: :smile:
:smile: :wink: :wink:


dude, wild, by the way, been reading and liking your poems

Jimmy

Totage's photo
Sun 06/08/08 03:36 PM

pop pop
goes the
wall shot

pop pop
hes deaad
on the wall

propped up
there
since he
operated on
his clipped
wings

pop pop
men who
shoot
bullets
get better
and better

pop pop
just a
flesh wound

goes rotten
goes insane

pop pop
they got
her
down

pop pop
one with
his gun up

pop pop
fuuck man
who you
shootin at

im trying
to kill god
our only
witness

bro
deaad men

cant hurt
shiit


Interesting poem. I like your style.