Topic: one of my favs i wrote a while ago
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Sat 06/07/08 11:06 PM
The Angel of His Dreams 1-May-05

With out her he's nothing

she is his everything

she is the Angel of his dream

they'll make the perfect team

if he could only win the fight

and ask her out tonight

but if she turns him down

he'll forever wear a frown

so he gains the disire and ask her anyways

will you go out with me one of the next days

she said no but before she told him why

he walked away and started to cry

she was busy that weekend

but always has liked him more then a friend

so it broke her heart

seeing him fall apart

she thought she had lost her chance

but a little later the met at a dance

right when he walked in thourgh the door

she led him out to the floor

they danced and talked the night away

in each other arms is how they want to stay


MirrorMirror's photo
Sat 06/07/08 11:07 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

rea7456's photo
Sat 06/07/08 11:15 PM
drinker drinker YOU ARE VERRY GOOD drinker

calmguy3's photo
Sun 06/08/08 01:46 AM
Very Well Done
happy flowerforyou drinker

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Sun 06/08/08 06:08 AM
Good write!
Welcome to the poetry section and JSH!(OPY)
flowerforyou :smile:

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Sun 06/08/08 06:10 AM
drinker Good read and welcome to your new home,lol:smile:

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Sun 06/08/08 12:18 PM
thanks for the comments