Topic: Feel so alive
Dreamer01's photo
Sat 06/07/08 07:31 PM
Edited by Dreamer01 on Sat 06/07/08 07:49 PM
I spontaneously wrote this a minute ago:P
Your words run through my head
Everything I could have been
Everything that is the epitome of perfection
In hopes of changing me
You filled my head with illogical fallacies

You assume you still affect me
Everything that I am today
You cannot take credit for
Everything I could have been
Is the polar opposite of what I am

All my dreams are going to come true
Everything you imagined for me
Is everything I will never have
Nor ever want in my life
Everything will be pure bliss

Puffins1958's photo
Sat 06/07/08 07:51 PM
Very interesting....
Heartfelt

flowerforyou

Dreamer01's photo
Sat 06/07/08 08:00 PM
Thank you so much puffins1958:)

friendly10's photo
Sat 06/07/08 08:09 PM
Excellent job. Hope you write another one someday.

Dreamer01's photo
Sat 06/07/08 08:11 PM

Excellent job. Hope you write another one someday.
Thank youhappy