Topic: As she lay there so still
rodfcutler's photo
Sat 06/07/08 10:38 AM
Edited by rodfcutler on Sat 06/07/08 11:05 AM
As she lay there so still
was the home of her soul,
is now so vacant and empty
life took its toll.

Where has she gone now
will I see her anymore,
is she watching me cry
as I ask myself why?

Why was she taken
at such a young age,
makes my blood boil
but I must now turn the page.

Is time to grieve
cause she is no more,
but am sure she will wait
and guide me through heavens door.
:cry:

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Sat 06/07/08 10:40 AM
:cry:

SimplyElla's photo
Sat 06/07/08 10:41 AM
:cry: flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 06/07/08 10:48 AM
:cry: flowerforyou flowerforyou

grneyedldy1967's photo
Sat 06/07/08 10:49 AM
very touching.... :cry:

MirrorMirror's photo
Sat 06/07/08 10:53 AM
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2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 06/07/08 10:58 AM
Very nice poem Rod, and sad..

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Sat 06/07/08 11:04 AM
:cry: That's sad!!

rodfcutler's photo
Sat 06/07/08 11:06 AM
Thankyou Sir.Just composed in an instant.Glad you enjoyed it.Have a great weekend!

rodfcutler's photo
Sat 06/07/08 11:07 AM

Ya,am just preparing myself for am sensing it will be my turn to grieve soon.
Take Care sweets!flowerforyou

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Sat 06/07/08 01:00 PM
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