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Topic: When >> Bye Rose
SouthernDoll29 Joined Wed 09/20/06 Posts: 73	Sat 02/17/07 01:08 AM
When I first saw you, I was afraid to meet you. When I first met you, I was afraid to hold you. When I held you, I was afraid to kiss you, When I first kissed you, I was afraid to love you, Now that I love you, I'm Afraid To Lose You!!

shadowdog Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 12773	Sat 02/17/07 01:10 AM
rose--ya ain't leavin'? are ya?---hope not

SouthernDoll29 Joined Wed 09/20/06 Posts: 73	Sat 02/17/07 01:12 AM
What do you mean by leaving, michael?

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Sat 02/17/07 01:14 AM
hey Rose...I'm down here

SouthernDoll29 Joined Wed 09/20/06 Posts: 73	Sat 02/17/07 01:22 AM
Sorry What Do you mean by leaving shadow?

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Sat 02/17/07 01:24 AM
that is a nice poem Rose

SouthernDoll29 Joined Wed 09/20/06 Posts: 73	Sat 02/17/07 01:27 AM
Thanks Michael,I try my best to write them as soon as they come in my mind.

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Sat 02/17/07 01:32 AM
it helps if you write them in note pad on your p.c. you can proof read,make corrections if needed, and then just copy/paste all in one fell swoop... sometimes the server will get lost if you sit on one page too long thinking or writing something... it has happened to me before

SouthernDoll29 Joined Wed 09/20/06 Posts: 73	Sat 02/17/07 01:33 AM
Ok Thanks for the advice Michael I will try that.

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Sat 02/17/07 01:41 AM
no problems... it sux if you lose your work just as you post... and th screen says can't find server...

shadowdog Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 12773	Sat 02/17/07 09:32 AM
sorry, rose--i asked a wrong question----it's been long day at work

karmafury Joined Sun 11/12/06 Posts: 10156	Sat 02/17/07 09:37 AM
Very, Very Nice.

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