Topic: "The Loving Eyes" By:Rose
SouthernDoll29's photo
Sat 02/17/07 01:02 AM
It was late,and she was going out.
She knew she was in love,
that she had no doubt.
A car pulled up,
and she went out the door.
This was someone she loved,
someone she adored.
They drove to a hotel,
without saying a word.
Then he said those 3 words,
The words she had never heard.
"I Love You" he said,
"I Love You Too" she replied.
He stopped the car and then he
replied....
"Ive been waiting for this...
For this day to come for us"
It feels so right,
I feel like we must.
She looked at him close.
She searched his eyes.
She saw his love,
She saw no lies.
So,she gave it up to him.
She even felt good inside.
But the next morning she
felt sick,
and she wonted to die.
After that night;he never called.
And slowly she began to grow.
She tried to hide it,
so no one would know.
But after nine months,
her water then broke,
and after 10 hours of labor,
her baby awoke.
She held him close,
and then saw his eyes.
She saw her love,
and his daddys lies.

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 01:04 AM
sad but sweet at the same time...
good poemflowerforyou