Topic: Blinded by My Tears
creationsfire's photo
Fri 02/16/07 04:06 PM
Blinded by my tears
I close my eyes,
I listen
And hear my fears

Calling my name
Whispers in the night
I listen
And my fears came

Leaves falling on my ears
I hide in my mind
I listen
Nothing is clear

I have no kingdom
To live in or near
I listen
My heart has no home

Raindrops roll down my face
I stand in the rain
I listen
I don’t know this place

I’m lost in my anguish
I simply cry
I listen
My heart is languid

With a wave of my hand
Time clears
I listen
I hear nothing in this land

Searching for what?
Finding what?
I listen
But nothing is caught

Absorbing no sound
Blind and alone
I listen
And you are gone.

Karen
© 2004




michael1313's photo
Fri 02/16/07 04:10 PM
sad but very Beautiful Fire!
good workflowerforyou

posted in '04?wow,dusted that one off huh?

creationsfire's photo
Fri 02/16/07 04:12 PM
Hahahahalaugh yuppers, I did. Thanx for the read. 04 was a very hard
year.........

Smiles,bigsmile

Fire

brighteyes66's photo
Fri 02/16/07 04:18 PM
my heart breaks and i cry great poem

creationsfire's photo
Fri 02/16/07 04:21 PM
Thank you Bright.......blushing

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 10:35 AM
read this again,and it put me on th floor again!

Good Writing Fireflowerforyou :heart: smokin

karmafury's photo
Sat 02/17/07 10:37 AM
Very sad and very well written.

no photo
Sat 02/17/07 10:54 AM
:heart: Fear not as YOU have FRIENDS HERE!!!!!:heart:
Some times are never forgotten,,,,good READ!flowerforyou

creationsfire's photo
Sat 02/17/07 01:08 PM
Thank you, you all touch my heart so much.