Topic: This Ol' House
michael1313's photo
Fri 02/16/07 01:24 PM
Walking into this ol'house,
everything is quiet,
no cat-n-mouse,
standing here,all alone,
only th' fire warming this ol'home,
silent whispers from this ol'mouse,
silent whispers in this ol'house,
just too quiet in this old home,
silent footsteps on this old stone,
walking around,all alone,
wondering where all th' memories have gone,
wondering where my memories have begun,
where are all my friends at,
standing here,wondering just that,
out and about,just getting out,
in th' park with th'kids,having fun,
out on th' town with their number one,
it's just too quiet in this ol' house,
so I sit at my desk,grabbing th' mouse,
thinking of writing,resting my bones,
thinking of writing,besting my poems,
but only th' fire warms these bones,
but only the fire,warms this home,
alone by th' fire,resting my bones,
is just too lonely in this ol' house,
tapping my keys,clicking th' mouse,
fire crackling,smells of wood smoke,
keys tickling,tells a good joke,
the only sounds from this ol'house,
alone by th' fire,is this ol'mouse,
telling how quiet is this ol'home,
memories of laughter,memories of love,
ghosts from th'past,or one I dream of,
feeling th' fire,smelling th' smoke,
writing a poem,telling a joke,
just too quiet in this ol' house,
tapping my keys,clicking th' mouse,
alone at my desk,th'fire warms my home,
another poem,while th' mouse warms his bones,
it's just too quiet in this house,this home...
Lonely Soulsmokin

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Fri 02/16/07 02:07 PM
wonderful Michael one day you will get your house mouse and she will be
vey lucky to have you ,you have a gentle soulflowerforyou
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creationsfire's photo
Fri 02/16/07 02:24 PM
You couldn't have said it better Marilyn...right on.

glasses

redmange420's photo
Fri 02/16/07 02:43 PM
Good stuff cuz!

michael1313's photo
Fri 02/16/07 03:03 PM
Thanx Ya'll,
think I need to run a cd and crank it up...
ROCK TH' HOUSE!!!

so what if I piss off th' neighbors?:tongue:

they can just turn down th' hearing aidssmokin

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Fri 02/16/07 03:44 PM
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michael1313's photo
Fri 02/16/07 05:17 PM
wonder if I need to lock th doors?smokin

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Fri 02/16/07 06:55 PM
Might better they may come in and do a whuppin on ya with their canes
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michael1313's photo
Fri 02/16/07 06:56 PM
I'll just turn up th music,and blow them out th doorlaugh

creationsfire's photo
Fri 02/16/07 07:11 PM
lmao.......just make sure you throw thier dentures out after themlaugh

michael1313's photo
Fri 02/16/07 07:14 PM
I found a pig that likes to wear them,
maybe I'll let him have th' dentureslaugh

creationsfire's photo
Fri 02/16/07 07:16 PM
hahahahahaaaaaa hahahahahabigsmile

michael1313's photo
Fri 02/16/07 09:22 PM
now if I can just get that silly grin off his face...smokin

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Fri 02/16/07 09:34 PM
Your crazy ....laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh
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michael1313's photo
Fri 02/16/07 10:02 PM
thanx for reminding me Marilyn,
I've been told that a few times today!laugh

what can I say?
it keeps me sane:tongue:

michael1313's photo
Sat 02/17/07 11:36 AM
another day in this ol' housesmokin