Topic: Thoughts
StellaBellaLuna's photo
Fri 05/30/08 03:49 PM
I am reposting this in non-paragraph format...due to popular demand haha, or rather the unpopular-ness of how it was presented last time.
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Pots and Pans desecrate the sounds of love,
and the way they glow takes my breath away.

And, the clank clank
when spoons bang against empty plates,
makes a good woman cry.

Shallow tongues lap at the luxuries around them,
and like dogs they flee to a smaller place.

To hide is to die, and to die is to hide away
from the ever-growing light
shining into your eyes.
To see the end is the light.

Should the wives and the mothers change the tune
coming from their heads,
then the sounds of love will continue to diminish,
and the clank clank will cease,
and the tongues that speak the words will be cut.

The music and the show must play on, even if there is no end in sight.

atleedagod's photo
Fri 05/30/08 03:55 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou
amazing

d4tc's photo
Fri 05/30/08 04:10 PM
Ha! I know just the one you are referring too. :wink:

Bravo! flowerforyou Nicely done!bigsmile

StellaBellaLuna's photo
Fri 05/30/08 04:14 PM

Ha! I know just the one you are referring too. :wink:

Bravo! flowerforyou Nicely done!bigsmile


Thank you, I think it was you who told me to break it up haha:tongue:

d4tc's photo
Fri 05/30/08 04:29 PM
Maybe... :wink:

I liked it paragraphed. I just love this format more.

::tongue: happy

sonic_storm's photo
Fri 05/30/08 11:17 PM
wow thats deep nice work

s1owhand's photo
Sat 05/31/08 01:25 AM
bigsmile

no photo
Sat 05/31/08 04:19 AM
flowerforyou :wink: flowerforyou