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Topic: Sweet Valentine
michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Wed 02/14/07 12:28 PM
Sweet Valentine would you be mine, if I asked of your sweet devine, upon your face,lips so fine, would you be only mine, Sweet Valentine,please be mine, for your love I'm inclined, within your heart I'll unwind, Valentine of my wondering mind, Sweet Valentine would you be mine, together in our sweet sunshine, warming hearts for St.Valentine... Lonely Soul

Morena350 Joined Sat 09/30/06 Posts: 13611	Wed 02/14/07 12:30 PM
THAT IS SO BEAUTIFUL, U CAN ADD MUSIC TO IT!!!

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Wed 02/14/07 12:33 PM
thanx Morena...if anybody wants to try to put it to music, go for it, and my usual 20%

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 02/14/07 12:34 PM
Beautiful Michael.

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Wed 02/14/07 12:40 PM
Hey my bro, this is TRULLY some good stuff and I find it some GREAT ryhme and IT COULD PASS ALL TIME! You need to have the Lion put it to music!!!

Witchypoo1969 Joined Wed 02/14/07 Posts: 71	Wed 02/14/07 12:52 PM
Master Michael - good writing there son!!!

jokerjoann Joined Sat 12/02/06 Posts: 115	Wed 02/14/07 01:17 PM
Thank You.

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Wed 02/14/07 02:11 PM
Thanx Y'all for reading was gonna add to this... maybe later

sweetcountrygirl Joined Tue 10/03/06 Posts: 2463	Wed 02/14/07 02:18 PM
Happy Valentines Day Michael...

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Wed 02/14/07 02:23 PM
HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY to You too Wanda

ToyotaGirl Joined Mon 11/06/06 Posts: 726	Wed 02/14/07 02:23 PM
Great read. Happy Valentine's Day Michael

marilyn Joined Sat 01/20/07 Posts: 789	Wed 02/14/07 02:37 PM
Very nice Michael, you just keep getting better

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Wed 02/14/07 02:44 PM
Thanx T.G. HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY!

michael1313 Joined Mon 08/21/06 Posts: 8707	Wed 02/14/07 02:45 PM
Awwww Shucks! HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY Marilyn

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