Topic: The Abyss.....
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Tue 05/27/08 08:10 PM
The Abyss.....

Each day I wake,
And I look up and stare....
At the deep hole I try to climb out of,
That leads me nowhere....

I look up,
And I see the light....
I want to climb out,
With all my might....

The way out is clear,
But the means to do it, not easy....
I know its necessary,
For its the path that frees me....

The climb up is hard...
The rope out is made of barbed wire....
I cuts and mangles me....
The injurys sting and burn like fire....

The rocks I climb are like razorblades,
And the rain coming from above is acidic and salty....
The pain of the cuts in my flesh and soul,
Makes me wonder if my decision was faulty....

My whole body convulses in pain,
As I keep pulling and climbing....
My hands cut by shards of steel in the walls,
I go numb of the pain, yet my bodys still writhing....

As my climb comes to an end,
At the top you appear....
You kick me back down,
I fear my end soon will be here....

Yet I awake the next day,
And I look up and stare....
At the deep hole I try to climb out of,
That leads me nowhere....





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Tue 05/27/08 08:15 PM
brokenheart nice...just how i feel

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Tue 05/27/08 08:28 PM

The Abyss.....

Each day I wake,
And I look up and stare....
At the deep hole I try to climb out of,
That leads me nowhere....

I look up,
And I see the light....
I want to climb out,
With all my might....

The way out is clear,
But the means to do it, not easy....
I know its necessary,
For its the path that frees me....

The climb up is hard...
The rope out is made of barbed wire....
I cuts and mangles me....
The injurys sting and burn like fire....

The rocks I climb are like razorblades,
And the rain coming from above is acidic and salty....
The pain of the cuts in my flesh and soul,
Makes me wonder if my decision was faulty....

My whole body convulses in pain,
As I keep pulling and climbing....
My hands cut by shards of steel in the walls,
I go numb of the pain, yet my bodys still writhing....

As my climb comes to an end,
At the top you appear....
You kick me back down,
I fear my end soon will be here....

Yet I awake the next day,
And I look up and stare....
At the deep hole I try to climb out of,
That leads me nowhere....






NOBODY READS ANYMORE!!!!! I guess if I put sex, date or nude pics, someone would read my stufflaugh

LIJOMA's photo
Tue 05/27/08 09:44 PM


The Abyss.....

Each day I wake,
And I look up and stare....
At the deep hole I try to climb out of,
That leads me nowhere....

I look up,
And I see the light....
I want to climb out,
With all my might....

The way out is clear,
But the means to do it, not easy....
I know its necessary,
For its the path that frees me....

The climb up is hard...
The rope out is made of barbed wire....
I cuts and mangles me....
The injurys sting and burn like fire....

The rocks I climb are like razorblades,
And the rain coming from above is acidic and salty....
The pain of the cuts in my flesh and soul,
Makes me wonder if my decision was faulty....

My whole body convulses in pain,
As I keep pulling and climbing....
My hands cut by shards of steel in the walls,
I go numb of the pain, yet my bodys still writhing....

As my climb comes to an end,
At the top you appear....
You kick me back down,
I fear my end soon will be here....

Yet I awake the next day,
And I look up and stare....
At the deep hole I try to climb out of,
That leads me nowhere....






NOBODY READS ANYMORE!!!!! I guess if I put sex, date or nude pics, someone would read my stufflaugh




Probably so, but still very nice.

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Tue 05/27/08 09:50 PM
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