Topic: Screaming
creationsfire's photo
Sun 02/11/07 08:00 PM
Screaming, Screaming
Inside myself.
I dare not make a sound.
Someone might see
Inside
The person I have found.
Inside I am screaming,
Screaming
Outwardly strong
They see
Inside I am screaming
Screaming
Someone please help me.
Darkness overwhelms me
My soul cries out for time
Swirls of clouds around me
Fogging up my mind.
They see me carry on my day
Without a care
They think
But inside I’m screaming
screaming
Overwhelmed, and keyed
Slowly the screaming stops
And I can rest my head
I lay myself down to sleep
To wake another day
Maybe I’ll be screaming
Mayhap I’ll be so calm
I’ll thank the Lord for that time
I wake so in the dawn.

Karen
© 2005

karmafury's photo
Sun 02/11/07 09:46 PM
Fantastic.

michael1313's photo
Sun 02/11/07 10:54 PM
restless dreams,quiet your soul...

good writing!!!flowerforyou

dizzydean5's photo
Sun 02/11/07 10:56 PM
well i dont know what to say but you and me fell the same way right know
i love it dean

whispertoascream's photo
Sun 02/11/07 11:00 PM
Nicely done.flowerforyou

DANE1973's photo
Sun 02/11/07 11:10 PM
My constant state of being.Great job Karen

creationsfire's photo
Sun 02/11/07 11:15 PM
blushing Thank you. Sometimes it is hard for me to sleep. I believe I
wrote this during an insomnia attack LOL.....thanks for your
appreciation everyone. It means a lot to me.

Smiles,

Karen

LAMom's photo
Mon 02/12/07 12:43 AM
Karen that was truly fantastic