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When I am sad will you hold me?
When I am scared will right beside me be the place you will be? When I am sick will you bring me tea? When I am having a bad day will you make my mussel pains go away? When I am feeling lonely will you promise to stay? I ask these things cause I am weak In my heart I ask you to peak. I know it's fragile so hold with care If you are not careful it will tear. So if these things you can promise me Then close to you I want to be. |
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(((Whisper)))
Beautiful ! |
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very nice whisper...
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Thank you guys
(((LA))) |
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That was very good whisper,(((hugs)))
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Thank you Dan (((hugs))) |
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Really nice Whisper. Good to be able to express your
feelings. 
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that was really good whisper
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alot of questions in a nice poem,,,
good work Whisper
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Excellent;that was beautiful whisper.I'd love to hear more from you in
the future.Well done.Godspeed!Cybear((bear~hug))
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Thank you everybody (((((hugs))))
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Very nice
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Very, very good Whisper.
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Thank you guys. I never wrote a single poem until I joined this site.
Thanks for inspiring me to write. Ok I did not mean for that to rhyme  
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