Topic: Lost.
whispertoascream's photo
Sun 02/11/07 11:14 AM
Alone I sit
Lonleyness is what hits
Tears ,they flow like rain
Is there ever an end to this pain

I sit here and prey
That you will come back to me someday
Lately life is nothing misery
Without here with me

You filled my life with such joy
My beautiful baby boy
The days they go by slow
When will the pain go away? I want to know

So far apart we are
But look up we can see the same star
Remember I am here
Please try not to fear

A mothers love is never lost
We will be together at any cost
For now I bid you a fair adieu
But please all ways remeber that I love you.

whispertoascream's photo
Sun 02/11/07 11:16 AM

I sit here and prey
That you will come back to me someday
Lately life is nothing misery
Without here with me

Correction

I sit here and pray
That you will come back to me someday
Lately life is not but misery
Without you here with me






Sorry for the error

michael1313's photo
Sun 02/11/07 11:18 AM
sad but sweet...flowerforyou

Nice work Whisperflowerforyou

whispertoascream's photo
Sun 02/11/07 11:24 AM
Thank you Michael

michael1313's photo
Sun 02/11/07 11:26 AM
remember to proof read before you post...
I've done it toolaugh

whispertoascream's photo
Sun 02/11/07 11:28 AM
I usually do. But tears were filling up as I was typing so the screen
was all blurry...lol.

no photo
Sun 02/11/07 11:28 AM
nice

LAMom's photo
Sun 02/11/07 11:29 AM
Very nice Whisper flowerforyou

whispertoascream's photo
Sun 02/11/07 11:31 AM
Thank you guys.

jenn_82's photo
Sun 02/11/07 12:17 PM
nice very sweet

whispertoascream's photo
Sun 02/11/07 12:53 PM
Thank you Jen

creationsfire's photo
Sun 02/11/07 01:19 PM
It seemes you sould is crying out for your lover. Nice work expressing
Whisper.........thanks for sharing.

Smiles,

Karen

creationsfire's photo
Sun 02/11/07 01:20 PM
Soul (correction) , yikes now who needs to proof read?

venusrose's photo
Sun 02/11/07 01:57 PM
ah, sending you hugs Whisper.

Cybear's photo
Sun 02/11/07 03:00 PM
Wow!Whisper;this is very deep and heart~felt.I luv
it.Godspeed!Cybearflowerforyou

whispertoascream's photo
Sun 02/11/07 03:04 PM
Thank you Creation VAn and CY.

But creation no it was not about a lost lover. But thanks just the same.