Topic: my childrens cry
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Mon 02/05/07 05:51 PM
the pain you have placed in there hearts
have made them build a wall so high
im tired of you tearing them apart
im tired of them asking why
please stop hurting our little girls
dont you see what you have done
please stop wrecking there world
dont you know they want to run
these are our little angels
god sent them from above
all i want to do is keep them from danger
we are suppose to show them love
now i cant even help them when they cry
all i can do is hold them and wipe away there tears
they still miss you even after all your lies
all i can do is tell them i am here
do you see what the HELL you do
now i cant stop hating you

written by/sharon/daddysgirl

iceprincess's photo
Mon 02/05/07 06:16 PM
I understand completely girl just be thankful you can wipe their tears
honey.

karmafury's photo
Mon 02/05/07 06:20 PM
No child should ever have that happen DGF. Very well written.

roughrouge's photo
Mon 02/05/07 09:28 PM
powerful and moving thanks for sharing it

mtironroses's photo
Mon 02/05/07 09:32 PM
well said and so truthful......... my little girls are now 30 and
34........ I never said a word against their dad. And it saved them from
hating him, in turn, gave them self worth.

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Mon 02/05/07 10:59 PM
the pain is deep for you and your little girls...


it is good to write it out,put the past on paper,
and leave the pain there too,as much as possible...

the mark of a great poem,
is the poets heart,
written on the page....


*Grass Hopper*

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Mon 02/05/07 11:20 PM
ice thanks im sorry u r going through some stuff my heart goes out to u

thanks karma i agree but im trying to just keep my big fat mouth shut
for them

rough thanks for posting i app the comp

nitron u r right thats why im trying to keep my big fat mouth shut
thanks for ur comp

m1313 u r so sweet yes there pain is deep about there dad
mine is for my babies sshhhhhh dont anyone tell my teen i called her my
baby she hates it i think there going to be ok as long as i dont loose
my cool

thanks to everyone