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I stand unto the sandy shores,
so desperate and alone. I stand unto the bloody sands, that the enemy called their home. My fallen comrades, so long ago, That used to make us strong. Remember how we All would be here? Well, I guess we all were wrong. Cause only I stand here now, and only I can see. The fight, the fight we fought so long. Is now down to only me. Where did my friends, take the step, That cut them to the ground? Cause where I stepped, Must have been blessed! My footfalls made not a sound. Must have been blessed, with stealthfulness, My Courage took no dive! For only I, the lucky guy... Stand here, still alive... But still I must, Not turn to dust, No, I Must Stand, and Fight! For should I prevail, and Justice Does Hail, The Enemy Won't Last The Night! Canteen empty of any courage, Nor do I have food that will hold the length... I'm running on nothing but empty reserves... But American Empty, overflows with strength. So I storm the hill, prepared to kill, I can see it in their eyes! They were not expecting, an Army Of One, I've taken them by Surprise! And my fallen friends are here again! They run with me by my side! This Desperate Charge of the Light Brigade, Their Spirit has not died! Here Comes All For One, And One For All, We Shall See, What We Shall See, Don't count me out! No, Have no Doubt! In the end, There stands only me... I stand unto the sandy shores, So desperate and alone... I stand unto the bloody sands, They Enemy called their home. Cause only I, stand here now, and only I can see... The fight, the fight, we fought so long, So only I, could be free... The Fight, the fight, we fought so long... So only I could be free... With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild |
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Wow...very powerfull.
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Wow...very powerfull. Well, thank you very much... You just went a lot higher on my popularity list! |
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you the man
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Very, Very Good. Bravo!!!!!
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Three Cheers For Me!
thanks everyone! Ya'all are making for a great morning! |
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Wow...very powerfull. Well, thank you very much... You just went a lot higher on my popularity list! Well you are a fellow eastern washingtonian...i grew up in Curlew, Wa..if you know where that is...near omak |
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Oh Benjamin, you never disappoint.
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Wow...very powerfull. Well, thank you very much... You just went a lot higher on my popularity list! Well you are a fellow eastern washingtonian...i grew up in Curlew, Wa..if you know where that is...near omak Lmao... Omak God, I do know where you're talking about! Curlew there for a long time? (stupid puns, sorry) Lol. Yeah, I live in Yakima. I'm thinking about moving back out to Co sometime tho. |
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Oh Benjamin, you never disappoint. (Oh, I don't know about that... But the bar just keeps getting higher and higher. (Good thing I own the building) You must not have read some of the others I posted this morning! At least one of them, is gaureenteed to be dissapointing! J/k. Thanks for letting me know you liked it HikerChicky... hee hee. Good to see you, as always. I wasn't really sure what peoples responses would be on this one, but I loved yours! |
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Edited by
isaac_dede
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Thu 05/08/08 05:08 AM
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Wow...very powerfull. Well, thank you very much... You just went a lot higher on my popularity list! Well you are a fellow eastern washingtonian...i grew up in Curlew, Wa..if you know where that is...near omak Lmao... Omak God, I do know where you're talking about! Curlew there for a long time? (stupid puns, sorry) Lol. Yeah, I live in Yakima. I'm thinking about moving back out to Co sometime tho. Yeah i lived in Republic for about a year, than curlew for 6 years. 13-19 GREAT place to spend your teenage years...i have friends in Yakima...do you know Mike and Alex(female)..nevermind their last name is escaping me at the moment. Anyways he's white..she is asian |
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Oh Benjamin, you never disappoint. (Oh, I don't know about that... But the bar just keeps getting higher and higher. (Good thing I own the building) You must not have read some of the others I posted this morning! At least one of them, is gaureenteed to be dissapointing! J/k. Thanks for letting me know you liked it HikerChicky... hee hee. Good to see you, as always. I wasn't really sure what peoples responses would be on this one, but I loved yours! Actually I read one that put me at a loss for words..thought I would go back later -18 year old Will...I was unable to comment..I have a suicidal 17 year old on my hands.. |
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Wow...very powerfull. Well, thank you very much... You just went a lot higher on my popularity list! Well you are a fellow eastern washingtonian...i grew up in Curlew, Wa..if you know where that is...near omak Lmao... Omak God, I do know where you're talking about! Curlew there for a long time? (stupid puns, sorry) Lol. Yeah, I live in Yakima. I'm thinking about moving back out to Co sometime tho. Yeah i lived in Republic for about a year, than curlew for 6 years. 13-19 GREAT place to spend your teenage years...i have friends in Yakima...do you know Mike and Alex(female)..nevermind their last name is escaping me at the moment. Anyways he's white..she is asian I'm not sure. Does mike have long, sorta curly, raggedy blonde hair? |
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Actually I read one that put me at a loss for words..thought I would go back later -18 year old Will...I was unable to comment..I have a suicidal 17 year old on my hands.. Lol... Well, I don't know what to say about that. Umm... Don't let them read it? J/k. It could be inspirational. Did the Title give it away tho? Or was it a surprise? |
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Actually I read one that put me at a loss for words..thought I would go back later -18 year old Will...I was unable to comment..I have a suicidal 17 year old on my hands.. Lol... Well, I don't know what to say about that. Umm... Don't let them read it? J/k. It could be inspirational. Did the Title give it away tho? Or was it a surprise? Benjamin - my suicidal daughter makes you lol? My goodness. |
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Wow...very powerfull. Well, thank you very much... You just went a lot higher on my popularity list! Well you are a fellow eastern washingtonian...i grew up in Curlew, Wa..if you know where that is...near omak Lmao... Omak God, I do know where you're talking about! Curlew there for a long time? (stupid puns, sorry) Lol. Yeah, I live in Yakima. I'm thinking about moving back out to Co sometime tho. Yeah i lived in Republic for about a year, than curlew for 6 years. 13-19 GREAT place to spend your teenage years...i have friends in Yakima...do you know Mike and Alex(female)..nevermind their last name is escaping me at the moment. Anyways he's white..she is asian I'm not sure. Does mike have long, sorta curly, raggedy blonde hair? yeah he does...normally with thing of chew in his mouth as well. he would be about your age...he was the best man at my wedding. But i lost contact with him..i heard that he and alex might have split up. I KNOW his last name...but i can't seem to recall it at the moment. |
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A very good poem of heroisim My firend.. bravo, well done..
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I'm not sure. Does mike have long, sorta curly, raggedy blonde hair? yeah he does...normally with thing of chew in his mouth as well. he would be about your age...he was the best man at my wedding. But i lost contact with him..i heard that he and alex might have split up. I KNOW his last name...but i can't seem to recall it at the moment. I'm not sure what his last name would be, but I think that I know who you are talking about... My sister Song, might know a little more then I. |
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Actually I read one that put me at a loss for words..thought I would go back later -18 year old Will...I was unable to comment..I have a suicidal 17 year old on my hands.. Lol... Well, I don't know what to say about that. Umm... Don't let them read it? J/k. It could be inspirational. Did the Title give it away tho? Or was it a surprise? Benjamin - my suicidal daughter makes you lol? My goodness. EEEWWWW.... YOu mean one you. Not so much lol... as in, laugh out loud, but more like, Loss of Logistics...? Poor excuse maybe... Well, tell her I said hi... that might cheer her up. Nothing funny about the S word... At least, not that one. (Good thing you winked at me) |
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A very good poem of heroisim My firend.. bravo, well done.. Daniel... Very long time no see! But, I really thought that you would like this one! And it pleases me to know end, to see a comment from you! Thanks brother!. |
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