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Topic: Simple War
FroznChild's photo
Thu 05/08/08 04:15 AM
I stand unto the sandy shores,
so desperate and alone.
I stand unto the bloody sands,
that the enemy called their home.

My fallen comrades, so long ago,
That used to make us strong.
Remember how we All would be here?
Well, I guess we all were wrong.

Cause only I stand here now,
and only I can see.
The fight, the fight we fought so long.
Is now down to only me.

Where did my friends, take the step,
That cut them to the ground?
Cause where I stepped,
Must have been blessed!
My footfalls made not a sound.

Must have been blessed,
with stealthfulness,
My Courage took no dive!
For only I,
the lucky guy...
Stand here, still alive...

But still I must, Not turn to dust,
No, I Must Stand, and Fight!
For should I prevail, and Justice Does Hail,
The Enemy Won't Last The Night!

Canteen empty of any courage,
Nor do I have food that will hold the length...
I'm running on nothing but empty reserves...
But American Empty, overflows with strength.

So I storm the hill, prepared to kill,
I can see it in their eyes!
They were not expecting, an Army Of One,
I've taken them by Surprise!

And my fallen friends are here again!
They run with me by my side!
This Desperate Charge of the Light Brigade,
Their Spirit has not died!

Here Comes All For One, And One For All,
We Shall See, What We Shall See,
Don't count me out! No, Have no Doubt!
In the end,
There stands only me...

I stand unto the sandy shores,
So desperate and alone...
I stand unto the bloody sands,
They Enemy called their home.

Cause only I, stand here now,
and only I can see...
The fight, the fight, we fought so long,
So only I, could be free...

The Fight, the fight, we fought so long...
So only I could be free...

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild indifferent

isaac_dede's photo
Thu 05/08/08 04:24 AM
Wow...very powerfull.

FroznChild's photo
Thu 05/08/08 04:32 AM

Wow...very powerfull.


Well, thank you very much...
You just went a lot higher on my popularity list! :tongue:

johncarl's photo
Thu 05/08/08 04:34 AM
you the manflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

karmafury's photo
Thu 05/08/08 04:34 AM
Very, Very Good. Bravo!!!!!

FroznChild's photo
Thu 05/08/08 04:37 AM
Three Cheers For Me! drinker drinker drinker
blushing blushing
thanks everyone! Ya'all are making for a great morning!

isaac_dede's photo
Thu 05/08/08 04:44 AM


Wow...very powerfull.


Well, thank you very much...
You just went a lot higher on my popularity list! :tongue:


Well you are a fellow eastern washingtonian...i grew up in Curlew, Wa..if you know where that is...near omak

hikerchick's photo
Thu 05/08/08 04:45 AM
Oh Benjamin, you never disappoint.flowerforyou

FroznChild's photo
Thu 05/08/08 05:03 AM



Wow...very powerfull.


Well, thank you very much...
You just went a lot higher on my popularity list! :tongue:


Well you are a fellow eastern washingtonian...i grew up in Curlew, Wa..if you know where that is...near omak


Lmao...
Omak God, I do know where you're talking about! Curlew there for a long time?
(stupid puns, sorry) Lol. Yeah, I live in Yakima. I'm thinking about moving back out to Co sometime tho.

FroznChild's photo
Thu 05/08/08 05:05 AM

Oh Benjamin, you never disappoint.flowerforyou


(Oh, I don't know about that... But the bar just keeps getting higher and higher.
(Good thing I own the building) laugh
You must not have read some of the others I posted this morning!
At least one of them, is gaureenteed to be dissapointing!
J/k.
Thanks for letting me know you liked it HikerChicky... hee hee.
Good to see you, as always.
I wasn't really sure what peoples responses would be on this one,
but I loved yours!

isaac_dede's photo
Thu 05/08/08 05:07 AM
Edited by isaac_dede on Thu 05/08/08 05:08 AM




Wow...very powerfull.


Well, thank you very much...
You just went a lot higher on my popularity list! :tongue:


Well you are a fellow eastern washingtonian...i grew up in Curlew, Wa..if you know where that is...near omak


Lmao...
Omak God, I do know where you're talking about! Curlew there for a long time?
(stupid puns, sorry) Lol. Yeah, I live in Yakima. I'm thinking about moving back out to Co sometime tho.

Yeah i lived in Republic for about a year, than curlew for 6 years. 13-19 GREAT place to spend your teenage years...i have friends in Yakima...do you know Mike and Alex(female)..nevermind their last name is escaping me at the moment. Anyways he's white..she is asian

hikerchick's photo
Thu 05/08/08 05:08 AM


Oh Benjamin, you never disappoint.flowerforyou


(Oh, I don't know about that... But the bar just keeps getting higher and higher.
(Good thing I own the building) laugh
You must not have read some of the others I posted this morning!
At least one of them, is gaureenteed to be dissapointing!
J/k.
Thanks for letting me know you liked it HikerChicky... hee hee.
Good to see you, as always.
I wasn't really sure what peoples responses would be on this one,
but I loved yours!


Actually I read one that put me at a loss for words..thought I would go back later -18 year old Will...I was unable to comment..I have a suicidal 17 year old on my hands..

FroznChild's photo
Thu 05/08/08 05:12 AM





Wow...very powerfull.


Well, thank you very much...
You just went a lot higher on my popularity list! :tongue:


Well you are a fellow eastern washingtonian...i grew up in Curlew, Wa..if you know where that is...near omak


Lmao...
Omak God, I do know where you're talking about! Curlew there for a long time?
(stupid puns, sorry) Lol. Yeah, I live in Yakima. I'm thinking about moving back out to Co sometime tho.

Yeah i lived in Republic for about a year, than curlew for 6 years. 13-19 GREAT place to spend your teenage years...i have friends in Yakima...do you know Mike and Alex(female)..nevermind their last name is escaping me at the moment. Anyways he's white..she is asian


I'm not sure. Does mike have long, sorta curly, raggedy blonde hair?

FroznChild's photo
Thu 05/08/08 05:13 AM


Actually I read one that put me at a loss for words..thought I would go back later -18 year old Will...I was unable to comment..I have a suicidal 17 year old on my hands..


Lol... Well, I don't know what to say about that. Umm...
Don't let them read it? J/k. It could be inspirational.
Did the Title give it away tho?
Or was it a surprise? huh

hikerchick's photo
Thu 05/08/08 05:16 AM



Actually I read one that put me at a loss for words..thought I would go back later -18 year old Will...I was unable to comment..I have a suicidal 17 year old on my hands..


Lol... Well, I don't know what to say about that. Umm...
Don't let them read it? J/k. It could be inspirational.
Did the Title give it away tho?
Or was it a surprise? huh

Benjamin - my suicidal daughter makes you lol?

My goodness. :wink:

isaac_dede's photo
Thu 05/08/08 05:18 AM






Wow...very powerfull.


Well, thank you very much...
You just went a lot higher on my popularity list! :tongue:


Well you are a fellow eastern washingtonian...i grew up in Curlew, Wa..if you know where that is...near omak


Lmao...
Omak God, I do know where you're talking about! Curlew there for a long time?
(stupid puns, sorry) Lol. Yeah, I live in Yakima. I'm thinking about moving back out to Co sometime tho.

Yeah i lived in Republic for about a year, than curlew for 6 years. 13-19 GREAT place to spend your teenage years...i have friends in Yakima...do you know Mike and Alex(female)..nevermind their last name is escaping me at the moment. Anyways he's white..she is asian


I'm not sure. Does mike have long, sorta curly, raggedy blonde hair?

yeah he does...normally with thing of chew in his mouth as well. he would be about your age...he was the best man at my wedding. But i lost contact with him..i heard that he and alex might have split up. I KNOW his last name...but i can't seem to recall it at the moment.

2Btrue2One's photo
Thu 05/08/08 05:19 AM
A very good poem of heroisim My firend.. bravo, well done..
drinker

FroznChild's photo
Thu 05/08/08 05:33 AM


I'm not sure. Does mike have long, sorta curly, raggedy blonde hair?

yeah he does...normally with thing of chew in his mouth as well. he would be about your age...he was the best man at my wedding. But i lost contact with him..i heard that he and alex might have split up. I KNOW his last name...but i can't seem to recall it at the moment.

I'm not sure what his last name would be, but I think that I know who you are talking about...
My sister Song, might know a little more then I.

FroznChild's photo
Thu 05/08/08 05:35 AM




Actually I read one that put me at a loss for words..thought I would go back later -18 year old Will...I was unable to comment..I have a suicidal 17 year old on my hands..


Lol... Well, I don't know what to say about that. Umm...
Don't let them read it? J/k. It could be inspirational.
Did the Title give it away tho?
Or was it a surprise? huh

Benjamin - my suicidal daughter makes you lol?

My goodness. :wink:


EEEWWWW.... YOu mean one you.
Not so much lol... as in, laugh out loud,
but more like,
Loss of Logistics...?
Poor excuse maybe...

Well, tell her I said hi... that might cheer her up.
Nothing funny about the S word...
At least, not that one.
(Good thing you winked at me) flowerforyou

FroznChild's photo
Thu 05/08/08 05:36 AM

A very good poem of heroisim My firend.. bravo, well done..
drinker

Daniel... Very long time no see!
But, I really thought that you would like this one!
And it pleases me to know end, to see a comment from you!
Thanks brother!.

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