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Topic: Perhaps... that could be me
FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 05/08/08 03:40 AM
Perhaps a walk through my crowded mind, will help me to see better... But perhaps I should run, not awaiting the visions that seek me in the mist. It would seem that even though I run as tho to make it to the other side, I lack the effort to make it even to the top. One cannot lose the race, nor win the race, if one stops in the middle. Stops to speculate on why he should run the race or why he should try to win. Perhaps losing is not in his blood,and he feels the ambition to rise above those who exploit his talents and potential. Even in the quiet of the night, he hears those who batter him from his goals, the one's who shake the tightrope... who leave him Dangling, above a world that is cheering for him to fall, so they may perchance rise to the top in his absence. Could that be me? With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild

joycro53 Joined Sun 02/24/08 Posts: 309	Thu 05/08/08 03:53 AM
Very nice.

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FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 05/08/08 04:17 AM
Although I barely use them, I LOVE emoticons! Thanks Everybody!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 05/08/08 09:29 AM
Perhaps a walk through my crowded mind, will help me to see better... But perhaps I should run, not awaiting the visions that seek me in the mist. It would seem that even though I run as tho to make it to the other side, I lack the effort to make it even to the top. One cannot lose the race, nor win the race, if one stops in the middle. Stops to speculate on why he should run the race or why he should try to win. Perhaps losing is not in his blood,and he feels the ambition to rise above those who exploit his talents and potential. Even in the quiet of the night, he hears those who batter him from his goals, the one's who shake the tightrope... who leave him Dangling, above a world that is cheering for him to fall, so they may perchance rise to the top in his absence. Could that be me? With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild We may fall,, but you my friend will achieve all the greatness you seek,,, You fly with a spirit unlike many...

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 05/08/08 10:05 AM
"Even in the quiet of the night, he hears those who batter him from his goals, the one's who shake the tightrope... who leave him Dangling, above a world that is cheering for him to fall, so they may perchance rise to the top in his absence. Could that be me?" No. Your Soul seems too great to not overcome

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 05/08/08 10:25 AM
"Even in the quiet of the night, he hears those who batter him from his goals, the one's who shake the tightrope... who leave him Dangling, above a world that is cheering for him to fall, so they may perchance rise to the top in his absence. Could that be me?" No. Your Soul seems too great to not overcome Thank you again... your deep words have caused me to catch pause in my breath... in awe of you... Thank you for shining your AngelLight on me!

d4tc Joined Tue 04/15/08 Posts: 2754	Thu 05/08/08 10:26 AM
"One cannot lose the race, nor win the race, if one stops in the middle." Wow. Thought Provoking!

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 05/08/08 10:27 AM
We may fall,, but you my friend will achieve all the greatness you seek,,, You fly with a spirit unlike many... LaMom... it is encouraging words like yours, that keep everyone you meet, from falling.

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Thu 05/08/08 10:52 AM
"Even in the quiet of the night, he hears those who batter him from his goals, the one's who shake the tightrope... who leave him Dangling, above a world that is cheering for him to fall, so they may perchance rise to the top in his absence. Could that be me?" No. Your Soul seems too great to not overcome Thank you again... your deep words have caused me to catch pause in my breath... in awe of you... Thank you for shining your AngelLight on me! Luv, you were and are already in the Light!!

angelinboots Joined Sun 03/02/08 Posts: 90	Thu 05/08/08 10:58 AM
Thank you for sharing! It's not the falling, but the bruising. But I know you'll get to that top and over.

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Thu 05/08/08 08:16 PM
"One cannot lose the race, nor win the race, if one stops in the middle." Wow. Thought Provoking! Glad it gave you some thoughts!... and thanks for saying so! Angelinboots, your confidence in me, sure makes me smile!

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 05/08/08 09:50 PM
Even if you walk the race you will win!