Ok people, tell me what you think. Had a bad day today & on days like this I write....

I saw the sky turn red tonight
Amidst the darkening clouds
As the rain began to fall
The drops all cried out loud

I saw a puddle made of tears
As if they came from me
A stream of endless breaking hearts
All leading out to sea

I saw the tree sway with the wind
And reach out branches long
Resembling arms yearning for
Her lover, safe and strong

I felt the wind blow through me
It left an empty space
Where once my heart resided
Gone…without a trace

Its very good with the right music that could be a good song

When ive had a bad day i just hit the bottle .....but the poem is good.

nice write

welcome to this side of the site

Good write and yes it could be song lyrics!

And heres a (((Hug))) for that bad day you had.

I AGREE

Thanks all...
...for the hug
...got a bottle? I'll drink it!
...for the welcome
...and for the kudos

Wow, I felt that one. Powerful images...

nicely put!!!

love it!

Deep, human, intense....

very touching and very descriptive too. That was beautifully written.