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Hi all good day!
I have been writing a song and want to know what u people think about it! it's just a part of it 'when I look in your eyes I see your soul shinning so much that warms my heart' so what u think? do ya think it needs a little bit of change? John |
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Edited by
Derekkye
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Wed 05/07/08 05:45 PM
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really sorry guy, but do you have another passion? hope you're not offended
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sorry guy, but do you have another passion? Derek,..reading your posts have made my night,..thanx
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Edited by
John_Loni
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Wed 05/07/08 05:48 PM
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really sorry guy, but do you have another passion? hope you're not offended yeah, I play drums and cook, don't worry I'm not offended at all! all commentss are welcome J. |
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For what it's worth I don't have much talent in anything - including critiquing
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Hi all good day! I have been writing a song and want to know what u people think about it! it's just a part of it 'when I look in your eyes I see your soul shinning so much that warms my heart' so what u think? do ya think it needs a little bit of change? John Maybe just a lit, No whatever you feel is perfect!!!
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Well it's better than what I could come with right now..
I am suffering from writer's block.. |
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thanks for the replys, actually I have been thinking in changing it a little I wasn't very inspired when I wrote this but wanted to know what others think!
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Hi all good day! I have been writing a song and want to know what u people think about it! it's just a part of it 'when I look in your eyes I see your soul shinning so much that warms my heart' so what u think? do ya think it needs a little bit of change? John Sounds like a great start. Keep up with it, and ignore the critics. If the lyrics mean something to you, then that's all that matters. Now you only have to find a rhyme to "heart" Hmmm.... |
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