Topic: groundhog day
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Sat 02/03/07 06:19 AM
ok m1313 this ones for you


groundhog day what a big joke
will it be early spring or will it snow
everyone watching everyone waiting
just to see this crazy groundhog come out of his hole
why do we watch why do we care
its not up to him its up to the man upstairs
hes in control of everything
so like my poem reads
still waiting on spring
do get me wrong i know the groundhog is cute
how many times has he been right do you wounder too

i know this is corney but m1313 asked for it so here it is

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Sat 02/03/07 10:35 AM
yes I did,asked for your rhyme,
an excersize,and I read your thyme,
then came and read it twice,
just to make sure,I think it's nice,
don't think I'm suspect,
th groundhog was just a subject,
an excersize for your rhyme,
thanx for taking your time,
no this poem was not "Corny"
better than being alone and horny...smokin

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Sat 02/03/07 01:39 PM
ha ha ha your so funny

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Sat 02/03/07 01:50 PM
at least YOU think so...laugh

good excersize of poetry...flowerforyou

now then...try another subject...

just pick one...anything,and rhyme about it...

if you can do that,you can rhyme about anything!!!smokin