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Topic: Hey Hey You You
hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Fri 05/02/08 07:12 PM
Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread You're not my friend And you have never been Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread You don't agree And this is all about me Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread I'm a big fake And my veneer's gonna break

Hindzfeet Joined Mon 03/17/08 Posts: 146	Fri 05/02/08 07:13 PM
Now that is a really cool play on words, my hat off to ya!

bastet126 Joined Fri 12/07/07 Posts: 15553	Fri 05/02/08 07:13 PM
hey hey you you...you're going platinum!!

robert1652 Joined Wed 11/14/07 Posts: 8447	Fri 05/02/08 07:15 PM
Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread You're not my friend And you have never been Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread You don't agree And this is all about me Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread I'm a big fake And my veneer's gonna break original Rolling Stones?

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Fri 05/02/08 07:15 PM Edited by MirrorMirror on Fri 05/02/08 07:20 PM


hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Fri 05/02/08 07:21 PM
Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread You're not my friend And you have never been Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread You don't agree And this is all about me Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread Hey Hey You You Get outta my thread I'm a big fake And my veneer's gonna break original Rolling Stones? yes..I supposed I should have stated as much but I assumed it was obvious.

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Fri 05/02/08 07:22 PM
ah, I see, if you have nothing good to say, don't say anything.

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Fri 05/02/08 07:25 PM
ah, I see, if you have nothing good to say, don't say anything.

Lily0923 Joined Sun 12/02/07 Posts: 20429	Fri 05/02/08 08:00 PM
YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE TRUTH.

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Fri 05/02/08 08:03 PM
YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE TRUTH. Enlighten me!

Lily0923 Joined Sun 12/02/07 Posts: 20429	Fri 05/02/08 08:05 PM
YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE TRUTH. Enlighten me! no, that's just my new thing like a fox....

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Fri 05/02/08 08:05 PM
YOU CAN'T HANDLE THE TRUTH. Enlighten me! no, that's just my new thing like a fox.... Like Tina's "I can help"

AngelLight Joined Sat 04/12/08 Posts: 4817	Sat 05/03/08 07:22 AM
Great flow

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Sat 05/03/08 07:41 AM
Great flow Thank you!

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 05/03/08 07:47 AM
Great flow When you play it BACKWARDS...... you hear satanic verses.....

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Sat 05/03/08 07:51 AM
Great flow When you play it BACKWARDS...... you hear satanic verses..... I had that problem last night when I was reading your poems backwards!!

Up2Us Joined Sat 03/15/08 Posts: 3926	Sat 05/03/08 08:05 AM Edited by Up2Us on Sat 05/03/08 08:09 AM
I had that problem last night when I was reading your poems backwards!! I take it you didn't have to change anything....

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Sat 05/03/08 08:17 AM
I had that problem last night when I was reading your poems backwards!! I take it you didn't have to change anything.... I plead the fifth!