Topic: The Search a.k.a. Lost(warning this is long)
dante84's photo
Fri 05/02/08 12:43 PM
I stretch my arms out to feel with my hands.
I touch nothing but pitch black
Frustrated there is no fraction of light here

Can't remember how I arrived
All I remember is sorrow and pain
An empty hole like somthing is missing in me

Something that makes me complete
Made me happy
And now it's gone

I stumble over something
Disappears in an instant
Or am I stumbling over my own thoughts

I start to panic in the dark
I yell out
Sweat dripping down my head
The echoing noise of running
My feet hitting the ground

And then a sudden rush of pain
World spinning, my head
I hit the smooth cold ground
But it's hard to tell what is ground, in such darkness

Standing up
Blood drips down my head
i wipe it away

Reaching my hands out
Feelin the object I hit
I feel glass

it is much begger than I
It seems familiar
The strength of the glass
The way it sounds when I tap it

Sunddenly it hits me
I search the object frantically
Searching for a button or knob

i find it
A knob as big as my hand
I use both hands to turn it

A familiar high pitch noise appears
The T.V. turns on
The bright ligh fills the dark, at least partially

It is seven feet wide and ten feet tall
With nothing but static on the screen

Without warning
The stati dissapates
leaving a strange glow

The empty hole in me seems filled
Sunddenly memories flash in the screen
A whole child's lifetime

Theboy who meets a girl
Who make him laugh and cry
Who helps him breath and takes breath away

The girls picture remains still
I look at it and am complete
It strikes me

The boy is m
When I am away from her I feel empty
I see her face and I am whole

So why am i still here
Suddenly an explosion

Glass is sent flying
The shards shoot through me
Some getting stuck in my skin

My body flys back into the darkness
Smearing the black ground with my blood
Alone in the dark again

Bleeding to death in the dark
I start to think
Can I die

Or am I already dead
Oh well....
..maybe if I die

I'll find her.....
but...who is she?

-Chris Sakai

d4tc's photo
Fri 05/02/08 12:54 PM
Good Write Man

"I hit the smooth cold ground
But it's hard to tell what is ground, in such darkness"

Awesome Line!

mandyatl81's photo
Fri 05/02/08 12:58 PM
not many people are willing to die for love....:heart:

dante84's photo
Fri 05/02/08 01:01 PM
Thanks!

kc0003's photo
Fri 05/02/08 01:09 PM
good read

drinker

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 05/02/08 08:09 PM
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