I hold you closer than we've ever been
nuzzling my cheek right under your chin
as goosebumps the touch brings in
I feel your breathing escalade as you
start to embrace me in such a way
I can not keep still, I must feel you
graze you, and i want to kiss you
Staring deep into each other
our lips finally meet
Wet, passionate kisses we share and wonder
why we hadn't done it before
Tingling and fluttering with the slightest touch
as i finally feel what its like to love
and to be held in its eternal beat.

Krystle McGee

nice write

"as i finally feel what its like to love
and to be held in its eternal beat."


i like that line a lot

as do I

Nice write.

What you just described is a wonderful feeling. There is no kiss like the first. Good job.