Topic: sour grapes
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Tue 04/29/08 11:13 PM
liked you better when you were alone
when you were bitter to the bone
spoke of chance and defeat
karmas' rug wipe you feet
liked you’re sarcastic tone
at the mention of the unknown
back before you found sweet
there was only bitter to eat

a poem i recently finished

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Tue 04/29/08 11:16 PM
Very nice thank you flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Tue 04/29/08 11:16 PM
Wheres my scrunched up face that tasted something sour emotioncon at? :wink: flowerforyou

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Tue 04/29/08 11:19 PM

Wheres my scrunched up face that tasted something sour emotioncon at? :wink: flowerforyou

haha thats what i was wondering i dont see one
:smile:

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Tue 04/29/08 11:20 PM
thank you lockbox

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Wed 04/30/08 12:01 AM
I like a tart banana too

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Wed 04/30/08 12:06 AM

I like a tart banana too

heheh
i like sour apples myself

sweetfireice's photo
Wed 04/30/08 12:12 AM
mhm theyre good too


sweetfireice's photo
Wed 04/30/08 12:13 AM
i liked your poem

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Wed 04/30/08 12:16 AM
thank you i'm glad you did
do you write?

sweetfireice's photo
Wed 04/30/08 12:19 AM
constantly i think

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Wed 04/30/08 12:21 AM
you post anything on here

sweetfireice's photo
Wed 04/30/08 12:25 AM
not a whole lot

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Wed 04/30/08 01:02 PM

not a whole lot

well there's always room for more poets and writers