Please forgive my heart

Please forgive my heart
So many time its fallen apart
So many lie's and dark times ive seen
Unknowing if my soul can be redeemed
Lay there the days passed by
Not breathing on my own hoping I would die
The repetitive noise rings in my ear
Ive forgotten every thing, my memorys dear

So give me one last breath, to seek peace
Hoping one day to repent and be at ease
No hope insight they speak of ending it
I cry silently, feeling them closing the pit
To be so helpless and lost, without hope
I feel like the man at the wrong end of a rope

I awake in a sudden daze
My throat sore and my body ablaze
A raspy breath, and all is gone
I face life again to face what Ive done
So many feel sorrow for the soul that is me
I know now this is hell, torment for my deeds
I remember not my act's yeat still feel sorrow
To face there judgment, for me theres no tommorow

Please forigive my heart
To be a different person, so far in the dark
Ive passed and come back, you ask me whay I hate this
The name of him is not who exsist
I am Angel, the firs tthing seen
I am nothing but always trapped in this being

Please forgive my heart

This poem is about myself, I was in a coma a few year's back...every one thinks I am some one I dnt know...I lost all his memorys, so we truely are 2 different people...Im just here to clean up his mess.

very good write my angel!
love you
~Betsy

u used 2 do drugs heeeh

No, I have a immune system problem that causes it to fight its self...well u can guess what happneds when it does that...and no not AIDS, its just some thing I was born with.

great writing .. very good

Ah, sad and strange as in dark summer dawns
The earliest pipe of half-awakened birds
To dying ears, when unto dying eyes
The casement slowly grows a glimmering square;
So sad, so strange, the days that are no more.

Dear as remembered kisses after death,
And sweet as those by hopeless fancy feigned
On lips that are for others; deep as love,
Deep as first love, and wild with all regret;
O Death in Life, the days that are no more.

Thanks hun :D, first time ive ever written about myself O-o.

(((Hugs)))